Good job!

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Terrific story! Thanks so much

Puré stupidity, saving the rapnape. Greate another stupid writer with love for rapist and bullies.

Okay - I loved it. I wish there were more. But I know that a story needs to end somewhere. I do wonder what career everyone would take, and who they would settle down with and where, what Dudley ended up doing, and if the MMM sold their products to other nation's Ministries...

Very exciting and a good end of those who were the dross of the world!

Throughout you've had some very minor grammatical issues...to/too, your/you're,etc. - but you have a typo or wrong word issue, "As the Forces of Light existed the Main doors of Hogwarts..." - perhaps exited is what you wanted.

Quite an unusual take on the story...intriguing...

Very tongue in cheek spell name Ravenclaw gave Harry - 'xeroxis totalis.' Bet you were laughing when you typed it.

I loved it! You are one of my new favorite authors! Thank you so much for writing this

Love your stories, wish you were still writing. You are a great author!

Not bad. I like an in charge Harry. I do wonder what happened next.

Elflings! I'm dying of cuteness overload!

May I say that I love this already? I like the idea of Ragnok being Harry's guardian, I like manipulative Dumbles stories, and I also quite enjoy stories in which Sevvy is a good guy but being controlled by two masters. Dudley as a good guy is a bonus! Plus, Ravenclaw's study was a very inventive idea, and one I have not seen before. Great job!

xeroxis totalis, really? I had a mouthful of tea when I read that, and sprayed the screen

An entertaining story and a satisfying ending. Thank you.