| Reviews for Spring Break |
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spnfan2005 chapter 38 . 1/13 love it please write more |
Schmaing003 chapter 8 . 10/3/2019 This really should be marked angst and hurt. The first 4th at least is Clark and Lois hurting each other and being stupidly ooc. This was annoying and meant that the attempts at humor fell flat because only the people around them are laughing. I do not consider watching characters suffer due to stupidity a clever or entertaining plot device. |
Jo chapter 38 . 9/15/2011 Great story, you should definitely do the epilogue. Your writing got better the further i got in the story! Keep on writing the CLOIS fics! |
TIBP906 chapter 38 . 12/21/2010 AWWWW,man. I was seriously looking forward to more. I wasn't paying attention to what page I was on and so when it came to the end I didnt expect it. This was an incredible fic, The Lois and Clark relationship dynamic for me never gets old. The spin you put on it I thought was well delivered and had me hooked. Absolutley LUVVED IT :) |
Wilhelm001 chapter 38 . 12/1/2008 Happy to see the story finished. Almost fell out of my chair reading the latest chapter. Please do an Epilogue, can't wait to see the discussion with the Kent's. Again great story, and can't wait to read your other stories. |
Tina P chapter 10 . 12/1/2008 LOL! You nearly killed me with the puke scene! :-D |
Tina P chapter 4 . 12/1/2008 Love it! Although, I don't get the dashes in words before "ed". Did you mean that deliberately? |
Ruby Rod chapter 3 . 12/1/2008 Great story, though you do need to proof-read more thoroughly. |
Elizabeth93 chapter 37 . 10/17/2008 well, damn! i want to read more! please update! XD |
MelodyHearts093 chapter 37 . 8/30/2008 GREAT CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! I LOVED IT! PLEASE UPDATE! |
Wilhelm001 chapter 37 . 11/25/2007 Really good story. I Read it over the last few days, and... wow, hope you write some more stories like this one. I wish the ending was a little better, but it was still a very good story. |
ArTeMuS09 chapter 37 . 10/6/2007 Great story, is it the end? If its not then please update soon! And great job. |
jwstahle chapter 37 . 3/14/2007 your ending sucks, please go on with the story. |
LucyKevinfan chapter 37 . 1/15/2007 Please update soon! |
Vicky chapter 37 . 12/17/2006 OMG! I can't believe how great you write! This story is SO freakin' AWESOME! You deserve ALOT more than just 232 reviews! You deserve like 30,0! But I quess you have so few becuz alot of people don't watch Smallville, which is a real shame. Anyway, i just want to contribute my one review, to bring you just that closer to your 30,0. Your story's complete, right? uz if it is...Congrats on your amazing story! |