This is amazing! Complex and beautifully written.

Beautiful. 'Even good words can hurt' is very true.
Find it hard to believe Hermione would fall for Harry but this just broke my heart.
Well done.

Good story

Gah, this was really good.

You really have a way with words...great job.

Jeez, this is like poetry!

Seriously beautiful, believable and so tragic. Lots of description and it just makes me so happy to read a gem like this.

The only thing was there was a tiny part towards the beginning where I was utterly confused, I think it could hve been a little clearer around Ginny's death part.

Overall though, really, really good.

Ps. I would love it if you would critique my stories, because you obviously know what you're doing :).

I don't know if I have words to describe just how beautiful this was.

That was good. It made me feel a little sad, but I liked it.

very good. i don't quite have the words, but it makes me sad in that wonderful way

A sad beautiful thing.

Ciao!

wow that was amazing! why can't I write like tht? Some people make a oneshot so dramatic at the end but this was perfect! I kind of left you wondering at the end but you felt like it was complete. Kind of like Deathly Hallows! 10/10

Damn, you're good at this stuff, aren't you? I want to keep reading, find a sequel where she *can* tell him her feelings, after the war is over.

wow. that was depressing. but good too. you have a real talent for writing.

This is amazing. Truly and simply amazing. Heartwrenching and powerful. Anything else just wouldn't be able to describe it.

Well done.