That's a cool style of writing. It's like the descriptions in the old rpg zork! Lol.

Great story I really liked it the plot was good and I liked the level of bashing it it and the Naruto x Hinata pairing and that Naruto was a fox demon and how powerful he was all in all good job.

please will you make a sequel to this story, it was really awesome!

I love the HinaxNaru paring you get a 9x10 so far reason I gave you a 9 was you spent way to much time on the whole jonie exams for Naruto.

Great story you have here!

WTF? Strange start to a story!

was an awsome story

you should be happy i read alot of book but i like this

you deserve more reviews then what u got this is the best story i have read in weeks

nice man...

its been a while since i read a story as good as this one, you know searching in almost 10 pages of stories of kyubi/naruto i have only found 6-8 GOOD stories plus this one XD

thanks !

there is a cat trapped here... or is it just me?

thanks for the very interesting story

Holy shit. I did not see that ending coming at all. Very well done, I applaude you.

this was a truly beautiful fic, there are to few storys that make me comment (i'm in college and i've on since I was in 9th grade. And in that time i've only done like 5 comments) I was super happy with the ending, it was a twist most people either are afraid to do or the just lack the creativity, this dosen't really need a sequel but I feally want one and I want one bad. The Uzumaki Chronicles is this years #1

I think...that this is a great fic. Congrats