Thanks for the adventurous read. :-)

Looks like Nick and Warrick both have trouble asking for help. Think it makes them look/seem weak to others. Maybe afraid others will think they cant do their job. But they all even Kenny did a good job of geting the bad guys/woman. But sadly The Voice got away somehow.

Oh my gosh! So I recently started getting back into CSI and decided to go looking for some stories. Oh my gosh! I can't even begin to tell you how much this story sucked me in! I stayed up way, way too late reading this story last night. And then I came back and read it again tonight and I still freaked out the whole time.
The physical torture, the psychological aspect to it. The epi pens! I will never get enough of stories set post Grave Danger that include medic alert bracelets and epipens.
I can't even begin to tell you how much I love this. The Nick and Warrick friendship. That Warrick had Tina explain anaphylaxis to him so he'd know what to do if Nick needed help. I adore the way you write Brass, so much. The Grissom and Nick relationship. I feel like that's a tough one to get right and you absolutely nailed it!
Dr. Chu was so creepy. I loved to hate her. The neighbor lady was fantastic.
I was sort of nervous about the size of the story, but man, it didn't lag for a second.
I don't know how people can write a story like this, but I'm so glad that they can because it hit all the right whump and friendship buttons for me!

OMG WHERE TO EVEN BEGIN?! I'm only just starting to get back into the world of CSI fic again, I'm doing a full rewatch of the show now and have a slight obsession with grave danger, and a friend of mine recommended this fic and i'm so glad she did cause I have not been so drawn in, so emotional over anything happening to Nick Stokes since he got shot in season 10 and jus the writing in this is so fucking good!

Great story!

Alright, with this chapter and Tina being kidnapped, I'm now hooked.

This story was absolutely amazing and I loved every bit of it. Your characters were very descriptive and I could completely picture the character of Kenny and you made him annoying enough that I wanted to punch him! That's writing, when you can get someone to feel a character enough to want to act out to them! : )

I thought you were very much in character with Nick and Warrick. Their dialogue in the show is very unique and I think you did a fantastic job capturing it.

The pacing was excellent and I read this all in one shot and I was sad it ended. Very well written! Sequel please?

That was an awesome story!

I miss Nick and Warrick's friendship.

Wow that was intense. Very sweet fic. I loved it. Great job both of you!

I love how complex the plot of this whole story is. (Sorry, I know I'm supposed to just be writing about chapter 1, but I've read this story over and over again, so I'm going to respond to the whole thing).

The look at Warrick's past is really great, and you developed the character of Kenny very well.

This story is very well put together! the transitions between scenes and actions are flawless, the grammer and spelling are correct, and the quality of this story is like any great book, the sentences worded just so, allowing the reader to picture whats happening as if it was a movie, aided by the in-depth details, and of course, your AWESOME writing abilities!While reading this, i had the sense of, just kinda falling into the story, and becoming a bystander, something that happens to people who know what a really good story is! If the producers of the show CSI were to read this, i think it would become the first CSI movie, and of course, the best one...!

I realize this is completely after the fact, but I just wanted to let you know that I've read virtually all of your CSI fics over the past few weeks, and I just wanted to let you know that you did an amazing job on all of them! This story is my absolute favorite because I adore the Nick/Warrick friendship, but I enjoyed all your other stories as well! You obviously put a lot of work into giving your stories depth and accuracy, and it's definitely appreciated! You have definitely mastered the art of suspense and cliffhangers between chapters. Also, I generally hate OCs, but I absolutely adored Kenny! By the end of this fic, I was terrified that you were going to kill him just when I started to actually like him! (I was also equally afraid his death would be accompanied by a South Park-esque "OMG- they killed Kenny" type remark... hehehe)

Generally speaking, I also enjoyed the fics that addressed the complexity of the Nick/Grissom relationship and how completely different their personalities are. I also love the way you write Brass, but that could be because he's one of my favorite characters. Each character that was included in these stories had a distinct voice that reflected how they are portrayed in the show, which is pretty remarkable, since each character is so unique. I'm also very impressed that you're able to blend character development with lots of action and suspense- most stories have one or the other, but these have both! Anyways, just wanted to let you know that even if your inspiration has moved to other things besides CSI, I truly enjoyed reading all your works- amazing job! Thanks for all the hard work!

Wow! This was fab! Forget Quentin Tarentino being a guest writer, they ought to buy the rights to this fic and make CSI:The Movie. I especially loved Chu... in fact, I'm almost sad you killed her. Going to add this to my faves, I think. Bril.

hi any chanch of a sequel? Hope so... thankfor a great read...

hi will there be a sequel for this story?hope so...