| Reviews for Metal and Fire of Hogwarts |
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Mrtyu666 chapter 19 . 6/17 Mate, it's been 12 years now |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/23/2018 Contradictory sentences, perhaps a better choice of words could be used?...hmm |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/23/2018 This is just...its missing a lot, Malfoy wouldn't insult him after the whole truce cover story incident with Umbridge, he would either lay back or tell his father PRIVATELY since he has to report back things anyway, the school looks like a normal school with magic as a tinge, meaning missing A LOT of details. Though I do applaud you for effort and the way its written, but the way its PORTRAYED doesn't seem good at all, just something out of the blue to pass time. |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/23/2018 Too OOC but meh, Roy's personality is not like that PLUS ITS FULLMETAL, no space in between |
Guest chapter 19 . 12/14/2017 Update! |
Guest chapter 19 . 11/26/2017 10 years! 10 YEARS! Update please! |
Guest chapter 13 . 11/25/2017 The people from FMA are really accurate |
snek chapter 19 . 7/30/2017 please continue this story it gives me life, hopefully you read this not sure though seeing as this hasn't been updated in 10 yrs |
Guest chapter 19 . 10/29/2016 ahhahahahaahahahaha... not abandoned... It's been like 11 years xD |
ghoost chapter 19 . 2/1/2016 I loved reading this story of yours! I have read many different FMAxHP crossovers before, but this has got to be one of my favorites. Even though you say that you're just writing this as you go, I'm hooked onto it and I can't wait to see what comes next! I love the way you write the reveals of Amestris and Edward to the residents of Hogwarts as well as made it something more than just Harry Potter centric. The way that you included London into the story was very well done and I love the way you have the Amestrians interact with Umbridge! I know it's probably been a long time since you've thought about this story, but I can't wait to read more! I hope you have a great day and keep up the amazing work! |
demonflower5236 chapter 9 . 12/7/2015 ok ive read better. |
dragonfox123 chapter 19 . 7/9/2015 Great chapter please update |
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 7/9/2015 Great plot and chapter |
The Awesome March Hare chapter 19 . 1/25/2014 This is really a good story. I love it and can't wait to see more of it. |
BSM99 chapter 19 . 12/22/2013 Are you going to continue this story? Please say you are - it's a pleasure to read! |