ha ha ha, check this out! I love your writing, and if you don't post more...

Go Kratos, chew out Mithos...

~Nakago

Yay! An update! And so soon! _ hehehe it was good! And I can't wait for the next one! I Hope the inspiration stays with you! Keep it up!

~Linkite

Wow. What a chapter full of twists. You're doing a fabulous job of moving this story right along, and I certainly hope it doesn't find a sudden end any time soon! As always, keep up the spectacular work, and take your time with coming up with the next chapter. Best not to rush things, especially after these past two astounding updates so close together!

Wow, Sparrow. What I can say is that your writing is getting better. And it was good before, so that's definitely a compliment. And you know me. I don't give out compliments unless they're richly deserved.

I think i'm in love with your Kratos.

It feels odd going back to Symphonia, doesn't it? After Abyss and everything. I love it, this story has so much awesome potiential, and i'm so glad you got your lazy ass into gear to write it.

Love ya. you prostitute.

-Nite

Finally! I'm so glad you updated! And with yet another great chapter as well. Things are starting to get interesting for Yuan, that's for sure. Keep this going, and try to lessen the time between updates, please.

Yay! An update! _ I love this story! I can't wait to read more! And no worries about it taking a while... It was worth the wait (and it's not like I'm done with my next chapter yet either...) LoL! Keep up the good work!

~Linkite

Oh my! Poor Yuan's house. Dude, I cannot wait until Kratos bitch slpas those assholes up side the head.

excellent.

Beaver Yuan!

Awesome! Yay for updating! Another great chapter! And don't worry about long chapters, all the more to read! _ I can't wait to read more! Keep it up!

~Linkite

Btw, Yuan rocks! _

You truly don't need to be so sorry (or so repetitive). I think we (the readers) know that life happens, and anyone that has written a story knows what its like to lose inspiration and motivation and take a while to update. Ahhgh, enough of my rambling, when there's another amazing chapter to review! Most of the time, its good to wait for great things, so then they can come back and blow you friggin away! You are truly an amazing writer. Keep this story going!

Hey there was another chapter! Yay! I can't wait to find out what happens! _ Keep it up!

Amazing! I can't believe I haven't read your fic. before! I loved it _ I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work!

Oh.. suspense! Oh, Kratos has enemies! Ooh, more Elves being stupid!

Seriously.. I find it odd that Nobody lusting for Martel has realized that she is a half-elf and racism against Yuan is the same as racism against her.. and that Mithos doesn't realize that propagating hate against half-elves is just a stupid, stupid idea.

He's smart enough to turn an entire town against a previously lovable guy, but he doesn't realize that? Seems kinda... i dunno.

Ah, lovely my dear. I really hate that little Mithos Yggasshole. You write him really well. And I love sarcastic Kratos!

Keep it up!

Wow was that INTENSE! I luv it! Keep writing or else I'll...I'll...do something! So plz update soon! N I luv how evil Mithos is! TEE HEE! He's just too KAWAII!

~Mithos FOREVER!~

This was a lot of fun. There was a little bit of everything in it. ...And Mithos was evil, a quality he lacked in the game [Ah, scary, evil child!]. Thanks for writing it.

-ShadowofUndine