I enjoyed this! Thanks for writing :-)

Awesome story, really liked it. :)

Awesome. Epic fight sequence here. :)

Oh my gosh. Dean's dreams are intense. And awful. Everyone hating on him like that. Oh my poor heartstrings.

What an interesting twist to the story! I like that Missouri was able to help.

Oh gosh, now this entire situation is just freaky. Something was really after Dean and now they have more coordinates as soon as they'd gotten out of the house. Who's able to track their movements that quickly? And what all is wrong with Dean? You're great at building up the suspense!

That really wasn't very good timing on Sam's part, but his concern is very justified. I have a feeling this isn't going to quite go as planned... but at least Dean has agreed to an Oprah moment after it's all done. And by that time, he'll really need it!

I really enjoyed this season one story. It fits well between the insane assylum and Faith. I always wondered at how trusting they were at just coordinates with no identifiable messages.

I LOVED seeing the boys in North and South Carolina. I wish they could afford to shoot on location. They'd probably love the warm instead of snow in Canada.

Good point, Sam :)

EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT!

Truly! I wish I'd had time to review every chapter, as that's what I normally do, but time was not my friend it seems. But damn, this deserved a review for each chapter. I feel some guilt now, of Sam Winchester proportions (LOL)!

Loved the ending- it was a total surprise in the way it came about. KUDOS on you for that! And for writing a brilliant fic with supurbe characterizations for both Dean and Sam. Not an easy thing.

I surely hope you'll be gracing us with another fic soon!

Honest. To. Friggin'. God. This chapter scared the SNOT outta me! CRIPES! When Sam said RUN I was just sure it was the final warning for Dean and then Sam would turn all bat-shit and shoot Dean again with rocksalt!

Amazing suspense and all the time they were running and feeling that .. that... something reaching for him.. then .. EP! I swear, my heart was racing WITH them!

Excellent writing! Great banter between Dean and Sam in every chapter and the angst is present without Sam bursting into tears at every turn. God, I hate with writers make him so wishy-washy. And I ADORE whumping Dean and protective Sam.. BRILLIANT!

Off to read more brilliance!

Excellent story, well-plotted. You pulled in lots of unexplained details from the series and kept the boys in character. Very enjoyable!

Yay! Sarah is a great character! Nice, how your story connects to the episode :D

Love how it's so dynamic. Nicely done. Believable, too.

Terrific story - I loved the premiss behind it.