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I read this story on Dokuga and let me tell you it is so daaamn good! I honestly couldn’t put it down. I kept on reading until almost 4 am and I had to go work. It was worth every single second of my time. Honestly, it is a story so very original and refreshing! Lemons were so good they made me wet, your Seshoumaru was so caring it melted my heart, kagome’s determination to persevere no matter what was inspiring... Sango on the other hand, wow! You went brutal with her. I’m just glad it wasn’t Kagome, does that make me a horrible person for choosing sides? :(

I don’t even know if you’re still around. I really hope you’re successful in any endeavors that you took on. I HOPE you kept writing because you are absolutely amazing.
Thank you very much for this. For sharing this awesome tale with us.

i love this story is based on Native American culture. myself being 25% Cherokee and 50% Black, i found this enlightening. but it pains me to see how the government treats them like scum and shit when they are the ones who are the original people that walked this land way before they show up and wanting to lay claim on everything. true i never been on a Indian reservation but i do want to visit even if I'm just passing through. i love and care about these people and i hope one day i get to be touch more of that side of my blood in this lifetime and if it was up to me, i would find an uncharted continent and lead every surviving tribe there is to this place where they can live peacefully. I'm not racist but i do see every ethnic group living in harmony peacefully. but always remember this... there NOT many white people out there that are not racist and have the same beliefs as i do. i hope one day it will come to pass through the Grace of God cause we cannot keep living like this and i hope you agree with me. again thank you thank you thank you for this wonderful story.

this was a wonderful story.

That was fantastic. I loved your descriptions of Kagome and Sesshomaru's dreams (especially in the first few chapters) and of the places they lived and stayed throughout. One of my favourites was the scene between Kagome and the wolves.

At times this seemed really racially insensitive. Some of your descriptions and characters really rubbed me the wrong way.
I can't help but wonder, are you Native American or have you ever lived on a Reservation?

This story was very well done, it had many twists and I liked the incorporation of Native American culture, it was unlike any other AU. The amount of angst was just right and I'm glad everything turned out happily in the end.

This story was brilliantly written with many twists. The dark edge accentuated the plot very well. Also, you were very descriptive in your writing. I could almost imagine it was real. What a terrific ending! Keep up the great work. You should also consider getting a job as a writer. This was the best piece I have ever read. THE BEST!

A really unique AU story for this pairing. I don't think I've read another one like it. It was well written and interesting.

I really enjoyed your story...I loved how it had a lot of feeling in it.

keep it up

what year does this story happen in ?

ilovethisstory

I love this story(:

sorry that I haven't really reviewed your previous chapters, I was just in such a rush to go on to the next chapter! It's such a fantastic story. It's so much different than ANY story I've ever read that has to do with Inuyasha. It's so unique and life like; that's what make it so special, along with one of my favorite reads. I was shocked and sad when and how Sango died, but it helped make JOURNEY a great story and helped the plot. Speaking of the plot, I absolutely love it(: I love EVERYTHING about this story! Bravo(:

xoxo,

Tiffany Chanel

P.S. Sorry for such a long review X)

great chapter(:

i really liked it

just one question:

how old r all of the main characters?

ur fast reply would be greatly appriciated

xoxo,

Tiffany Chanel