Nooooooooooo...

Yay! Tinkerbell 2 the rescue!

So sad...

Omg I totally agree with u, they should've had a different ending. Then Disney made Peter Pan 2 with Wendy's daughter and I was so sad. Super happy that ur making this, I've been waiting 4 1 like urs 4 awhile.

Peter and Wendy got married

I love this story, it's absolutely one of my favourite things to imagine Peter grown up and his grown-up relationship with Wendy, especially when Peter's...um...grown-up self and his reactions to the same are described so splendidly, and their relationship so wonderfully explored, basically a generally amazing story

hot! and romantic gosh I wish Wendy would just tell that hunky 5 year peter how she feels

You made peter pan no more than a horny young man. how could you.
with that overlooked, amazing story :D

This is quite gory for a peter pan novel...he isnt a murderer.

I think the story line is amazing and im loving reading it, but I gotta say, letting his men have their turns? gave me a disgusted feeling that i dont like associating with peter pan :L apart from that, this is one of my favourite stories. You're very talented :P

You have potential to be a very great writer. The only thing that kept me from getting lost in the story was your punctuation errors and therefore lack of. I'd suggest reviewing punctuation before continuing to write if you want to become anything more than a fanfiction writer one day.

Will somebody please tell me wht the sequel is called!

Great story, as I said review will be headed your way.

I would have to say that this is the only one of the Peter Pan stories that I have read.

I did watch Peter Pan when I was younger and still like the movie and new ones that they made.

This was a great story and I would love to watch this as a movie.

Bravo

J.D.

yay! this is awesome!

nice