I've read this piece more than 100 times and I love it even more than ever. It's a shame you've left it unfinished because it truly is a wonderful piece of writing. The story is intriguing and although it's so far from canon, it's totally believable.

I thank you so much for this awesome story and I beg you to find your muse and finish it. It really is a beautiful and charming piece and I absolutely LOVE IT! :D

I love this story! I'm so glad you updated too!

Your style is so awesome, really vivid; you take the high road too. I mean by taking the time to create every detail to the best of your ability. Little bits of detail other writer’s usual neglect or omit altogether. It gives your story extra depth in my opinion. I'm really impressed.

The plot is great, I really like were you’re taking it. Looking forward too the next installment. Keep up the amazing work.

Oh, jeez. This isn't good...Wonderful story by the way. Excellent writing and VERY original ideas.

Update soon:)

~Sara

This is so amazing. I never thought the idea could work as well as you're making it. Your writing is so fluid and in character. I like how you add a little drama without drowning the reader in theatrical dialog. I also think your chapters are the perfect length. I really can't begin to express how refreshing it is to reading something creatively original, yet true to the characters I know and love. I'm waiting on pins and needles for the next update. (Hopefully sooner than the last?)

Gag!

I knew this was gonna happen! I knew it!

Ah, well. It's still really orginal. I don't think anyone here has gone down this 'path' with Eames and Deakins before.

I know the feeling of finals week...i'm in mine right now. Good luck with your exams and update when you can.

OMG! I did NOT see that coming! Holy...Update soon please!

~Sara

Ah my dear, another triumph! I love the setting and the idea of Deakins and Alex having some work history together. (Of course, the only thing that can make this more interesting is Bobby, but I don't think you'll disappoint.) You have my attention - waiting eagerly for the next installment!

Whoa, this is amazaing...and so gut wrenching. Keep it the great work.

That was heartbreaking and written extremely well...Can'twait for the next chapter...

~Sara

Great story. I wish there were more stories out there that had such careful characterization of Deakins. I also like the mentor relationship between he and Eames.

Holy crap-apples...this is awesome.

Keep writing because I said so!

Really, this is great, I can see everything too. I'm so looking forward to more. See ya next chapter and rock on!