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Motherofthehorde chapter 1 . 3/15/2014 One of favorite movies...limed tbe story.. very well wtitten. Thank you for writing. Motherofthehorde |
judikickshiney chapter 1 . 3/17/2010 Oh my dear goodness. I loved this so much. It was incredible. The detail and thought you put into it, and the depth of Will and Warren's friendship... Oh! I'm speechless. It was fantastic. *snugs* Thank you so much! Judi |
Rain City Ruckus chapter 1 . 12/3/2009 This is spectacular. Like, really, really spectacular. I love the way you used Ethan, he does not get enough love. You made all of them so alive, so themselves and so impressive in what they are. I am utterly and wholly blown away by this. |
studentnumber24601 chapter 1 . 12/2/2009 This is totally out of the blue because this fic is pretty old, but I've been searching for good Sky High fic and found this. I'm so glad I clicked! I love the way you use ALL the characters, especially Ethan (who never seems to get any love from fans). The look into their lives surrounding the circumstances is great. And I absolutely love Warren's POV thorughout. You completely nailed him, and it's great. AND I love that it's really a fic about everyone actually being HEROES, with action and adventure and lots of tension and suspense. Though my favorite moment was probably the firefighter. I loved him and that moment, and the callback at the end to how Will and Warren will go visit him. Basically: this fic is fantastic, and I'm totally in love with it. Great job! |
xt1me chapter 1 . 1/8/2008 An absolutely brilliant story. |
Abaddonite0345 chapter 1 . 11/13/2006 Bizzare and brilliant. The story was very good, full of action and all of that, but the characters are very sharply drawn and very well voiced. You have a knack for writing ff that I wish you would use on Sky High more often. M. |
Pointed Teeth chapter 1 . 5/12/2006 Bear with me, I'm going to babble at you *sheepish grin* Fantastic. Completely fantastic. The characters are perfect and IC and it's wonderful that you included all of them and touched on their quirks and idiosyncrasies and assets. I loved the Hero names you chose for them, and the origin of Will's name. The costumes were all great, and it was particularly nice that you didn't devote _paragraphs_ of description to them. The action was phenomenal. A realistic - and terrifying - enemy, and reasonable response from the city folk (i.e. call the army and the RUN LIKE HELL!) and I loved the motivation behind the 'blobs' creator. Not evil, just bitter and misguided. And the part where Will almost cycloned himself to death! My god! I completely read that on the edge of my seat, very exciting stuff! Overall there was very good pace and structure, and wonderful planning. (and when his uniform got burned away *snickers* oh so funny - and I loved the detail on masks) And the fireman's hand! My gosh, that was just _ouch_. Completely brutal, that poor guy. And Warren just totally rocked my socks. Completely. You rule as a Warren writer. I loved how he interacted with his team mates, and the exposition on their friendship game at the end was WONDERFUL and so touching. A great story, really great. It's going straight on my faves list. _ |
Abuhin chapter 1 . 1/12/2006 Totally awesome! It's like an epic. Each character with their own inner workings, and their dynamic while working together. Nice side stories, too. |
Nagia chapter 1 . 12/8/2005 Absolutely beautiful. This story has been added to my favourites list. Your picture of how they work, of where they land... It's absolutely gorgeous. It rings true to character. I love it to death. I would absolutely LOVE to see more in this era, this UNIVERSE, that you have created. |
PencilDamage chapter 1 . 11/27/2005 this is really really good. it's a shame its a oneshot because i would like to ahve read a little more about the aftermath of the battle. but still, really great job. |