Ohh, I wish you had continued this! Your characterization is damn near perfect and there's so much more you could work with. Liiike, Pope's reaction when he sees Brenda? (Because we all know he still cares for her more than he should.) Or her team, because while they're not close this early in the show they still feel sort of protective of her here. And Fritz, of course! Oh well. Good work anyway :)

I know it's been almost 5 years since the last update but I'm known for being optimistic... I would love to read more ;)

Honestly, possibly the best Closer fic out there. I love your characterization of both Brenda and Friz... I wish you'd write more in this fandom.

this was well done!

please please please update soon!

Nice, do update soon!

I hope ther will be another chapter it is good.

I love when people go over awesome episodes so we can get more insight, color, thoughts of people on it.

Like when she was actually being attacked and to her mantra to keep herself in check afterwards.

Keep it up!

Colly E. of twin*muse

Excellant! Very well done. I love this episode. I love it when my favorite characters get hurt. I'mm not exactly sure what kind of comment that makes about me but...meh. I look forward to your next chapter. We need more Closer fanfics!

It's neat reading everyone's thoughts during this episode. Can't wait to see what else your gonna do with it. Update soon.

What happens next...it's been a longg time have it finished anywhere else? does anyone know of any other The Closer fanfiction? Google searches do nothing.

Please write another chapter. I really enjoyed this so far, and please don't stop with it.

I am really enjoying the work so far. Really interested to see where this is going. Keep on writing apparently we are few and far between.

I'm just a bit confused. It seems like there's really nothing more here than what happened on the episode. I mean I realize we're hearing the inner voices of the characters but my imagination has already supplied that.

very well done