Such a shame that's all there is to this. Quite a compelling story I would've liked to have seen to completion. Loved the peeks of action-figure-Mars, particularly the end scene. Here's to hoping one day you are suddenly struck with inspiration again.

This is fantastic, if you ever decide to finish you have someone who will gladly read it.

Wish this was finished

If you are still writing you should finish this! I want to see how it turns out.

This is great, I'm sure you're never going to complete it but know this, if you ever do I will be here ready to read it.

I do so enjoy this story and hope that you come back to give it an ending one day.

continue!

Just discovered this... any chance you'll continue it? It's been over 4 years. :)

Very cute story so far.

I'd love to read more.

wow love this story so far and lol when ronnie said ur ass is grass lmao anyway i hope u finish this soon

UpDate please its a good story!

You. must. update. now.

Love it. LoVe it. The blend of pre and post Lilly Veronica is fantastic and I love Logan... just generally :). Please say they come out of the closet soon.

I read this story a while ago and I really liked it, but it's been such a long time since an update, I'm wondering if you're not going to finish it.

u havnt updated in so long! pleze say u will? pretty pleze?

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love will eny else find out?