I am not sure I liked this story, the action near the end was a welcome reprive from hours of character building. There isn't much I can say about this particular story. The new gear and tech is a wecome change. The realationship between Ron and Kim changed, sorta. It was never really clear if they were going to continue that aspect of their relationship or hold untill married. Monkey fist being a rightfull owner of mystical monkey powers is cool. I can't wait to see what his role becomes in the furtre. I thank you for this story and am off to read another.

Very insightful on Ron's part on why Kim feels guilty about making love for the first tine. Nicely done.

Great story. Interesting play off of "A Sitch in Time" here. Good scenes with MonkeyFist. So Kim and Ron go in Space and find out what its all about. It looks like Neil is alive and well but sometime else. I did get lost in couple of times throughout the story but it could be trying to taking in the Fury story elements.

Overall great but I'm somewhat disppointed in the scene where Kim and Ron get "together". You've built up get scenes of near misses in previous stories and then it comes down to this. However, do continue on. I'd like to see how the rest of the IFH/TS turns out.

You mean Ron's afraid of SPIDERS? Oh my! Tolkien, C.S. Lewis, and Baum (creator of "Oz") all had a horror of spiders, while I love 'em! A home can never have too many spiders, and a wolf spider can never be too big! I guess I'm not fated to be a fantasy writer!

dude i love it. it was an awesome story i cant wait to read the next one! you are definetly on my favorites list!

kickass!

Is MrsDrP like the best mom of all times or what? She's like June Cleaver, Mrs. Brady, and Mrs. Walsh all mixed together.

Awesome tale, dude! Well Written.

P&L! THANKS!

Awesome smuffage Args! Yes, that pic of ivy's is one of my favs too.

One more chap, and I can start on yer new read.

THANKS!

Yea! *does a happy boogie*

You need to market Trin. Or at least her program; I'd love one in my car. Give her Mrs. P's voice!

THANKS!

Rondo! Bust out that sword and start whippin' some butt!

Mother made a pant joke. I love it!

Another good chap, Args.

THANKS!

I agree with the Blessed Mother. KP & Rondo been hitched for about a gazillion years now. 'song as old as time...' type thingy.

Write On!

THANKS!

Rondo! ;)

Someday, I says again, I'm reading this whole thing at once.

Great stuff, Args.

THANKS!

Reading again. man, you get deep. I need to come back and re-read in its entirity, cover to cover.

good chap!

THANKS!

Okay, I'm lost. But it was a fun read even so. I'll be waiting for the next story.

Kim and 25th century cooking technology (shudder).

Ron and 25th century TV technology (shudder again).

Nicely done!