| Reviews for Soul Splinters |
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  michelle chapter 13 . 2/3/2006 Wow! Another great, detailed chapter. The imagery,especially in the woods, allowed me to picture exactly what they were doing. I have but one complaint; there are a few grammatical errors. Actually one: "Alex’s screams was enough," and "the Major and Harry was patiently" should use Were instead of Was (one of my pet peeves). Oh, I must also say that I enjoyed the length of this chapter. Long chapters are always welcome! Please continue soon. |
 ranma8962 chapter 13 . 2/3/2006 Absolutely love this story! Really appreciate the strength you are giving to the women in this story. Even Parker with her emotional torment torturing her came through. More, please |
| JLC chapter 13 . 2/3/2006 Another awesome chapter. It's all coming together nicely - I particularly liked the silent communication between J/MP. Thanks for the regular updates. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
| Naomi chapter 1 . 2/3/2006 The story is fantastic! I hope the next chapter will be up soon and will be as good as chapter 13! Please ! Naomi |
| bloodymary2 chapter 13 . 2/3/2006 I loved this! I know I keep saying it, and it's true, but your story is amazing! ANd you definately outdid yourself with this one. THe characterizations were amazigly well written and the action was perfectly thought out, culminating in this wonderful turn of events... Parker and Jarod's silent communication was awsome and your description of it surpassed any expectations I might have had. I particularly liked the last phrase, about the ending of the story. Well done! Will Lyle find them? Will he assume the worst? Or not? (things are never easy with you, are they?) What will become of J? Will Jarod's family continue eluding the Center? oy, the happiness, I loved Mr. White's demise! Last, but not least: What will the future hold for MP and Jarod? Recovery seems like a sure thing and both can start to heal... That is if you have nothing else hidden up your sleeve... Ow, I'm afraid to ask. Please write more an dif at all possible, post more soon! |
| julie chapter 13 . 2/3/2006 another brilliant chapter i just love this story,is this the end of alex i hope not i love how you are bringing all the characters together. cant wait for the next chapter please post soon. |
| huntress14 chapter 12 . 1/31/2006 Beautiful! This chapter was perfect. I love the fact that Jarod found Miss Parker. Great!Keep up the good work! |
| Sirus183 chapter 12 . 1/30/2006 I liked this chapter. I really want to know what happens next. Update Soon! |
| ruby chapter 12 . 1/29/2006 please write moore i love your story have you ever gottet paid money for writing |
| JLC chapter 12 . 1/27/2006 Oh boy - I don't know what to say - this chapter was simply wonderful. The best so far... |
| anony chapter 12 . 1/26/2006 omg plz continue |
| Vandr chapter 12 . 1/26/2006 Really love the latest two chapters, glad Jarod finally found Miss Parker. Brilliantly written, it really draws you in and amkes you want to read more. Hint, hint ) |
| NYT chapter 12 . 1/26/2006 VERY moving chapter. |
| cally4311 chapter 12 . 1/26/2006 This is my favorite chapter so far, can't wait for the next chapter |
| bloodymary2 chapter 12 . 1/26/2006 WOW! This chap was , by far my favorite chap of them all. Your descriptions of the dream land Parker had been stranded in, interwined with Jarod's rescue, composed a trutly amazing scene. It took my breath away... I also liked how Parker glinged to Jarod as a safe harbor in all that darkness. It was realistic and well thought of. After all, Madness had a firm grip on her sanity and she needed something to hold on to. In the beginning, when Parker was dreaming of different endings to the events on the end of IOTH, was also a great scene. I always thought that it wouldn't take much for her to regret the way she pushed him away. ( turning points, right?) Of course, I liked Margaret and Emily's escape ( the woman fled the Center for 30 years, catching her should be an easy task), but I'm just a sucker for MP and J, preferably together... All in all, the writing was outstanding and the characters very well displayed. I have absolutely nothing to complain about... Nothing at all! GREAT JOB! What will happen now? With MP? With Jarod? Will the plan still work for J? Will MP recover fast? Will Lyle even allow a recuperation? Even without J, Jarod can still be controlled, right? (hum, Lyle ain't stupid, after all) Magaret will be reunited with her family? Will Mr. White be able to track them down? Oh, so many questions, so little time... You are making the PRETENDER proud! WRite more, soon, but let's not skip the studying part, right? One can not live on Fanfic alone, though I wish it was possible... Till next review or reply, Mary |
