I KNEW IT! I luv this ship! XD I loved the poem! XD I luv your writing! XD

This was just marvelously beautiful. It's so powerful and heart-wrenching! I like stories involving Paula Cracker, personally. She may not have been around for a long time, but I kinda liked her in a weird, 'love-hate' way. ;P Even though I think that the whole "she broke 2D's heart and is a horrible bitch" theme is overplayed, the way you described how Noodle felt about 2D and about the break-up was magnificent. She truly loves him as a big brother, and never wants to see him in such misery again. Fantastic story~!

dear green hope 5 i did like pj's. and i like this one too!

I love it! It's so bittersweet...but, you got part of it wrong. You see, when you said that only Noodle knew how fragile 2D's heart was, you were wrong. I know, too. Mine's just like his. *hits heart with fist*

Lol, sorry, just ignore me! It was great, and sorry I didn't review before! I was kinda busy, writing chapter 4 for Axe Princess and stuff. So yah, read that when you get the chance! _

Write more poems!

Awo! That was adorable. I'm really likin your fics here (even though its a poem...)

-TSSC

Are they really brother and sister? ive only seen feel good inc, and bought demon days.

aw...that was sweet...and sad...sweetishly sad. yeah, that's it.

so, is 'Aishiteru" "i love you"

Wow great poem beautifully written

That'cool! I just love it when 2D and Noodle are together. Plus your poem was very awesome unlike those other rip-off fics I've read.

-Matt. Good luck with your other fan fictions.

That was like pure Chinese silk wrapped around a ball of broken glass-beautiful beyond belief, but it hurts at the same time. I love the chorus (well, it's not a song so I guess it's just a repeating part. Meh, it's 8:49, I'm not thinking about it)-something about that "aishiteru, my brother, your feelings are mine" line just sends chills down your spine. Well, congratulations in every way. You done good. _

Happy Thanksgiving, by the way!