I have the good, the bad, and the utterly strange to go through.

I read the entire story before reviewing, so hopefully this doesn't seem like an unknowledgable flame or anything of the sort.

I. The Good
I absolutely love HGSS, to me there aren't enough out there! Especially complete ones that actively tie up loose plot holes, so kudos to you. I loved the various ways that you showed Severus' true character instead of him being ooc, because for many I've noticed he seems to be difficult to write due to his depth of personality. The length and grammar of the story was also fair, if you had a beta they were uber good, and I appreciate the effort from all who were involved in the making of this story because it creates a relatable yet realistic outlook on life despite being placed in a fantasy world.

II. The Bad

However, while the story was good, Hermione I felt was ooc, due to her bookish nature. But the real issue I would consider is that through the entire story not once did I lose my marbles and laugh even though it is categorized as Humor. Which brings me to a suggestion, due to the major focus on the relationships between Severus and Hermione, and the other characters as well as the dolls and all the drama it caused, it may be better re-genre'd under Drama. Because there were many fights, love gained, love lost, gained again, and good lord it was like a tornado in my home state! XD

III. The Utterly Strange

You're a beautiful author and I hope you continue writing stories and have been since this one was finished. I think everyone should see your work :) it is very moving. I wish you luck and hope someday you may write and publish an original story. If you do send me an email at , much obliged! I would love to buy a copy and read it.

This is a weird fic, but a good one. Some things aren't very realistic, but it's very well written and you can't really put it down. Thanks!

I just realized how old this fic is. MySpace?!

ahahahahaaaa normally I get the rant from the other end of the spectrum where the Americans argue that because they're american they're going to spell it their way, so thank you for arguing your point that it damn well is a British series and therefore it will be spelled the British way. As a Brit, you are much appreciated.

ahaha...I can imagine Severus reaction..." what?! "

this was alright. I felt it was a tad immature here and there, the way Severus and Hermione interacted. Also I learned a new word, ROPABLE!

AWWW THIS WAS THE BEST
my new favourite fanfic author *giant bear hug*

I laughed at your realization/realisation rant because I found at least 4 misuses of weary or weariness or wearily (tired) when you meant to use wary or wariness or warily (cautious). It was obvious without you saying so that you are Australian because you used ropable and sook in your story, which are slang words not standard in any English dictionary. And for all that you declare yourself, "a teacher of English," rather than an English teacher, nobody is perfect.

Wow! I just started this. about five jours ago and I loved it! Great job!

You made me cry for Ron, the great ginger git, damn it !

The end was hilarious. Nice work.

Hmmmmmm. Not sure how i feel about this one

This chapter felt a bit like a cop-out

Gods! I wasn't expecting that turn.

Gah! This is just going to explode in their faces, I just know it.