| Reviews for MoonbeamDancer's Story |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2013 This is awful. Smh. |
 Milly Wonka chapter 1 . 5/1/2013 WOW that was crappy. Lame plot, lame characters, lame writing, lame grammar and most of all a freaking lame story. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2012 Wow...this was just terrible.. |
| Of Kings and Queens chapter 1 . 8/10/2011 ... Jesus. This was crap... You've created a Mary sue, you know that right? Well, since I don't want to waste ten minutes telling you how sh!t this was, I've made it my mission to make sure you see this YouTube video. It's of this girl reviewing your story. Just remove the spaces and all. I assume you know the drill. www . youtube watch?vmVfXHTmZkAc |
| Shadowclanwarrior chapter 1 . 7/20/2011 Congrates, you have a Mary Sue :D! Seriosuly, you named your character after you... wow... just wow... |
| random-person chapter 1 . 3/28/2011 i'm sorry but your character's a pure breed Mary sue oh and only a few cats have magical please try to explain the fight bits and moonbeam dancers kidnap a little why did Macavity want moonbeamdancer and whats his problem with the jellicles |
| yeew chapter 1 . 3/20/2011 Pure garbage. Get grammar |
| Adi Sagestar chapter 1 . 8/10/2007 Um... not.. very good? |
| AnimatronicCritter chapter 1 . 7/12/2001 Very good fic!Kinda reminds me of Sailor Moon in a way... |
