To start off, I DO NOT HATE THIS STORY BY ANY MEANS!
Personally and in my rightful opinion, I really dont like and can't satnd the sudden increase and knockout of how fast she is recovering with the 1st! three chaps. This isn't the first time I've seen or read of this happening, but it's like one of my biggest pet peeves on how author's take real life situations disorders and and other bad stuff then add it into a fictional setting. Bur then have the characters that have it make a miracle recovery all sudden in the very beginning.
My thing is, if your going to do that or incorporate that into your story that you need to make the characters recovery slow and not so flip flop.
These are all just my personal opinions about the story you are fully entitled to wherever and however you want to take the story this is just my opinion only in opinion and what I think that should have made more sense to me.
I really do hope you don't take this personally cuz I am not attacking your story I have not taking you it just this is what I see in a lot of you Yasha specifically could go May related fanfiction be across or in their own Universe especially when you use dark themes or topics cuz some authors tend to make her not make her but put her in the setting of dark things and topics then do a complete 180 the next chapter or within the same chapter and have her make 3/3 not make but be on her way to recovery like 3/4 of the way.
THIS IS NOTHING PERSONAL!

Can't wait for the next update!

Please update the story

of course gets good then ends how in the heck is that fair

please write some more. what happens next.

Awww... Please let her be okay. You should name her step-father naraku. I think that would fit. Please update soon. This story is good.

Noooooooooooo! Why did you stop?!

Update! Plzz?! ಥ_ಥ

I absolutely love this story and can't wait for you to update. Hard is awesome with kagome and I want to see her handle black hat. Keep up the great work

PLEASE UPDATE I WANT TO READ THIS! ;( hope u update soon like really soon :)

Its intense tho its sad there are bittersweet moments! please update!

you sure you're not dead or something...? "

u should update

omg you havent updated it 6 YEARS! you need to update if you come around to even reading this review. but you should add more fluff to it. Nya

Please please I am seriously begging you right now, don't make her pull away. Please just let them start dating there. If you make her pull away from him I will die.