Enjoyed this story a lot. Thank you

Loved Lorne's poverty, but I thought he was a natural gene carrier. Fun story.

Sweet.

*plotbunnies purr approvingly*

This was good. Loved Lorne's voice and backstory, and the ever-present snarkiness that is McKay and Sheppard. Thanks for writing it. :)

I really enjoyed this

I really enjoyed this - read it ages ago but must have forgotten to review, as it's letting me post this.

I really love the way you have written Lorne and given him such a believable back story. The whump was great - seeing it from Lorne's point of view was different, and good. I'm now off to check out your other stories.

Another great story- I very rarely see much with Lorne as the main character so this was refreshing. You mentioned a great story to read at the beginning of Sentry Duty. It was called "Geek Protocol" by Koschka. I have been unable to locate the story or author at this website. How can I access it?

I really liked this story! You're Rodney/Sheppard interactions were spot on and the h/c was wonderful.

I also really liked how you used Lorne as the narrator. We don't get a whole lot of him in good SGA h/c fic so this was especially interesting. Thanks for sharing!

Greatly enjoyed this story, particularly the references to a favorite silly movie of mine ("Adventures in Babysitting"). I loved reading Lorne's POV in this one, he's not got near enough fiction written about him. Thanks for sharing!

Excellent story! I had a great time reading it. Very humorous.

Congrats! Lots of stars!

Very cute. Great job.

Very nice! Love Lorne's voice.

Aw. This was such a sweet story. Even the bumps and bruises didn't detract from the cuteness. I love your Lorne voice.

I love your story! But Major Lorne is a major in the U.S. AirForce, not the U.S. Marines. Besides, I don't know if 'major' is even a rank in the Marines. Other than that, your story is great! :)

Great story.