No matter how many times I read this over years and years, it never fails to take my breadth away

This is beautiful and sad and wonderful. When I read this, I felt it in my heart and my soul. It's so interesting and well written, too.
Thank you for sharing.

This was really beautiful! I love every aspect of it. The plot and everything is just perfect. I so wish I could say more but I have no words.

Amazing!

~Poodie

This is the most amazing and emotional fanfic I have possibly ever read. I think this doc deserves so much attention- it's absolutely beautiful. Thank you

Beautiful.

oh god! so he stayed with her. so sad

Sad yet creepy and plausible at the same time.

this is a really creative story and wow my feels

Woah. That's a sad way to end a kunoichi's life: with her love.

I have no idea if Temari ate Shikamaru's heart, but I undersiood one of the meanings of her scentence. It was love. Shikamaru gave her his love.

Wow I've never read a ShikaTema fic where Shikamaru becomes Temari's shadow that was an amazing idea good job this is now my favorite fanfic:)

awww how sad

That is. . . So sad. But still incredibly sweet.

I've read dozens of Shikamaru/Temari fics but never have i read one of such a... dark nature. I liked your concept; the plot was original and nicely put together. I thought it was quite a different take on their romance and some of the lines left an impact. Great job! D

Pretty darn good for two in the morning.

Seriously, this fic is beautiful, though I'm usually not a fan of the huge angst/character death, it's a great idea that's wonderfully put together, despite a few unimportant mistakes I spotted on my fourth or fifth read (i like it that much. lol) The idea of it is really interesting, and I'd even be interested in hearing more about his actual death (if you haven't written it already, I know I'm really late reading it, my bad...) Anyways, great job and good luck in your future endeavors.