I think both stories (the Look of Love and Laying it Out) are a pretty accurate description of the inner workings of Grissom's mind. Great work.

I don't know what's with me but I kept laughing all through out this story, lol. Anyways, this great! Love it:)

Love it!

So wonderful. Need I say I love your stuff again? NOPE )

Loved it! The inner workings of Grissom were fantastic. It made him vulnerable in a way that just made him all the more real. Fantastic job!

What a great sequel. That was so sweet! You have the characters down pat. Great job!

nice, i really liked it!

Oh, BAD me! I can't believe that I haven't let a review when I first read this sequel, I had certainly a very good excuse; but I'm in a reviewing mood tonight so, I reread this story, and it's clear that this story deserves a review _. Well, after this little introduction, maybe I could begin to let out the hysterical part of me, couldn't I?

OH MY GOD! I LOVE IT, i, SO GREAT AND ADORABLE! J'AI ADORé!

Okay, now that you're well scared, I become more calme héhé _ Frankly, you're a genius, you have this way to make this thing between them so...so...soso okay? (I'm sure you have understood, hein?). Again, I think you are very talented to describe human feelings, especially those which are often really hard to explain, because of their...soso (it's my new word when I can't find what I want to say, even in french lol). Because I've read all your stories, even if I haven't reviewed all of those (yeah, bad me I know _), and I can't forgot how you have described Sara's panick attack in "The Deep End", and your description of Grissom's nervousness is so real too! It remembered me how I feel everytime I have to speak in public. SUCH A TRUE description! And after that, their little discussion... I do my 'rouhouhou' sound again hihi _ I'm so happy for Sara, I'm so happy for Griss, I'm SO happy for them, I SO HATE TPTB! you have right THEY ARE SUCH UNFAIR PEOPLE!Really, thanks to great authors like you to make us still dreaming. THANK YOU, rocking girl (yes, it's your new pseudonyme ;-))

*Elialys*

P.S. : I swear that I'm not under the influence of any drug as I'm writing this message. I just LOVE reviewing, and I love it much more when it's for you, because I know it will make you pretty happy (admit it, you are grinning _)

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I dont want to sound monotonous and giving false praise...but it just seems like you know the characters so well...everything seems very...natural. I guess that's what i'm trying to say...

What a wonderful conclusion to your previous story. Gil really fought a hard battle in this one. It was very touching.

*cries* wow, you really did a good job with the sequal! I felt every emotion Grissom did... this was beautifully written... you could easily do a sequal, though! I'd love to see thier relationship progress through your eyes... you do everything so wonderfully. Great job, hope to read more from you soon!

That was sweet. I can just picture Grissom being that nervous and flustered while trying to express his feelings towards Sara. Good job.

That was so sweet! Thank you for continuing the story. Wonderful emotion, and I loved the pulse reference.

Oh how sweet was this! I just love Grissom's insecurities and Sara's patience. It was all very touching in a way... *happy sigh* Good for them! :) Keep up the excellent work.

A nervous, absolutely flustered Grissom. Love it. He's always so friggin sure in his actions and I love the idea of him "unhinged".