Reviews for Consecration
DunningKrugerExplainsAll chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Ummm...for some reason I feel compelled right now to go back and leave reviews for a bunch of fics which I enjoyed over the years, but was too lazy to review at the time.

Love the sparseness and overall effortlessness of the writing. I read this piece when you published it, so, yeah...you wrote a fic which got stuck in my head and has bobbed up out of my memories now and again for seven years. A writer can't ask for better than that!
Brokensword chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
All of your stories are wonderful, but this one might be my favorite. The economy of words, and yet the way the images and plot are still perfectly clear, is really amazing. It's perfect.
Starry McNight chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
This is awesome! Very well written, and it captures all the emotions between one of my favorite couples!
jcole chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
Wonderful bookend to Paris Lights. You can see how the characters have grown and changed. Eve if it won't last.
LeMay chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
You have definitely a certain style, in the tradition of "film noir" - no unnecessary word, mood instead and much left for the reader to imagine.

Your use of present time gives it a timeless frame.

Wonderful, thank you.
Smoky chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
Beautiful.
ni1ightgl0o chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
Oh my. Your writings just get better and better. I have read all of your Noir fanfics tonight, and I must say that this one is my personal favorite. I am so glad that you have written this, and I hope you continue to write Noir fics (especially with romance in them!). Bravo! Your work is amazing. Thanks for sharing it with us.
cott chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
i think you must be in love. but anyway...

unlike, i suppose, the vast majority of today, my attention span stretches just enough to accomodate novel-length fictions... and moreover, they happen to also be a preference. yet, there's something about the sparse style of your work that compels. there's no need for wordiness here - your command of characters and universal emotions is subtle but undeniable. and there's an attractive, notable, absense of reader-patronizing here. nothing unlikeable here - except for the unimaginative individual. thanks.