This is good. I already said so much about Emily on another work, so I can't repeat myself. But this works well, too, and I can picture saying this to Victor. She'd be forever grateful for him helping her be set free, and he'll feel the same for allowing him to be with Victoria.

I love your poem! I think it really describes Emily's feelings and brings out the same pity for Emily in me that I felt when I watched Corpse Bride.

I think it's really good and touching.

~Iris

*starts crying* OMG THAT IS SAD! There are alot of sad poems in this fandom.

I think I have a friend near where Emily is burried. He died because of a Harry Potter fanfic. His name: The Fourth Wall.

HE WAS MY FRIEND! AND NOW HE IS GONE! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

I think that this one was lovely too! I do agree that it's not quite as good as drowning in a dream, but it's still great!

I've read your stories. but i have decided to post a comment on this poem because i was really interested in poems and i really REALLY loved it so much!(and ofcourse, i also loved your fanfics so please write some more!) its awsome how you wrote this poem in Emily's POV. And thank you for your kind words to one of my fanfic. I'm glad that you liked it

OmiGOD! That is so good! I'm amazed at your talent to capture Emily's feelings. *beams* I love it so much. You're an excellent poet, and I bow to you . Maybe soon I'll read your other one _

Not good? Poppycock! This was brilliant! I loved it! You captured Emily's thoughts perfectly. I saw the movie for the first time yesterday (unfortunately it came out later over here is Australia) and this is the first fan fic I read about it. You really touched me with this poem. It is great! Well done! Do you write other poems? Please contact me if you do I would love ot read some. Look me up through my name.

Ohh! soo beautiful... I felt soo bad for poor emily at the end of the movie. I felt that it should have ended where he did die for her... they just fit together... Victor seemed so relaxed around emily -_-, but o well, great job on this one, and if you dont mind me saying i think i prefer this one to "drowning in a dream." _ ciao!