Brilliant training technique-if an unpleasant one. ;) If the mechs had paintball guns, it'd be just like one of those corporate team-building retreats. Nice job-very well-written and humorous.

More please!

A nice story that could do with a bit of polish. The bunched up dialogue and spelling mistakes are a tad distracting. Examples of editing are listed below.

“If we get caught, I’m blaming it all on you.” Sunstreaker panted.

“Aww, you do love me.” Sideswipe teased, earning himself a smack across the back of his head. “But seriously, I think we might need to split up.” The red twin said; jerking his thumb back toward the meter wide swath of trampled grass behind them. “Even Sludge could follow this trail.”

“You sure that’s such a good idea?”

“I’ll try to shake them. You keep the others busy.”

silty silting or silted

manoeuvre maneuver

arials aerials

Hopefully, you’ll fully edit “Fugitive” when you’ve the time. I really like the general setting and the ending depiction of a determined fugitive followed by equally determined trackers.

I've just got to fav this one, because it reminds me of Calvin and Hobbes when they do such things as playing football inside and outside, or try to play even the most strictly-regulated of sports "cross-country" style.

hahahha honestly you neva eva know what will happen hahhaha

Oh Primus! I am so glad I found this! A lousy weekend just got saved because of you! Thank You!

You did an excellent job portraying all the characters, even the Aerialbots. They were rarely given characterization outside Silverbolt and Slingshot, so even their fans (myslf included) Sometime write them wrong. But you were spot on perfect.

giggles Oh yes - much fun is to be had on training missions. X3

I'm enjoying the way you're padding the more everyday lives of the Autobots out :)

Hahahaha! I feel sorry for the "fugitive" Autobots. Sideswipe stuck in the ice and Prowl being slung over Sludge's back were the best! And I bet Optimus is having a great laugh out of this.

Funny!

Hahaha, and only one gets away. Hmm... I wonder if a 'Fugitive' ever thought about laying low until their persiut had passed,then returning to the Ark and locking themselves in it somewhere. If I was Prime,I'd keep recordings on hand for later reviewing/laughs.

first i think at at whatta heck my favorite twins had don this time.. when Houn, Jazz and Racthet are affter them.. now.. i just laugh my lungs out BWAHAAHAHAHAAHAA..!

Aw, poor Prowl. You'd think our resident tactician would know not to go into those canyons when the Dinobots are on his tail like that. Love the mental pictures all the way through.

*snickering insanely* My Prime amuses himself by giving in to his streak of practical joker (and when Ultra Rodimus Prime is in a playful mood no one is safe), yours apparently prefers playing Candid Camera. Very amusing. About time Prowl got picked on. Just watch your back around my character; I think Kup is going to maul whoever introduced Ultra Roddy to slingshots and paintballs.

*chuckle*

Nice one.