Cute and loving, poor Akari though! It's old, , but it would be great to see a continuation of this. What about Akari?

This was good! Very well written, even if the plot is overused... No offense whatsoever, becuase you took the idea and used it well!

Also, do you know if the 2nd volume for the To Heart manga has come out and/or is going to be released? Please reply VIA e-mail, if it is not too much to ask.

Even though this couple is not my favorite (I am an Akari/Matashi shipper, though I have yet to write a fic for them - school and marching band are taking quite a lot of time), this is a great one-shot.

~Cryptic Accolade

This was a good fic. I wouldnt mind reading more of it with this pairing or if you continue this fic.

Tell your friend you can write a To Heart fic, and win an award for it too.

this was a very good story, i dont know any thing about the To Heart anime but this is a very good representation of it and i would like to see it now. Ja-ne (_)

Nice story. IMO To Heart 2 sucks btw..