That captures them fairly well I think. I like it.

-SQ

By the way, how old is Arty in this story? Is this supposed to come

after The Atlantis Complex, or is it when he's like 14? Before the

Limbo transportation? Because if he is... can you spell, "Awkward"?

Okay, I just want to say for the record, maybe this story is a little bit too... mushy. Artemis doesn't sound like Artemis and

Holly really does sigh too much. And, why are they watching a show

about cooking? Either way, I laughed out loud when I read Holly

say, "You falling in the pool." A pool? Were they swimming, or did

Artemis fall in by accident? Oh yeah, one last thing: The title

doesn't suit the story. This is Artemis Fowl, not World War II.

Anyway, love the story!

I've gotta say, this was EXACTLY what I was expecting to happen. I

just wish it was longer. But when I come down to thinking about it,

I wonder, "Would Artemis and Holly actually be together? In that

way?" Anyway, this was a wonderful story, and I give the writer two

thumbs up.

aw! so sad, yet delightfully sweet! 3 great job!

~MFCMC

.MORE.A.S.A.P.!PLEASE!

LOVE IT! I so wish you'd write more, it was a great story.

aaww you have to finish this, so they can live happily ever after and have lots of mini human/elf babies with artemises brain n holly's kick-ass ness (and her ears too)

Oh, I hope she stays! This is my favorite pairing! It's a really good and well written fic, too!

ah, Kitty, it is good to have you back... we have missed you muchly... This is lovely, as always. And Eye on Fowl is back from the dead! woohoo!

Firstly, I'd expect YOU to know better than to say "hazel eyes locking onto blue." FANGIRLS use that phrase, bloody hell. Secondly, this fic makes me squirmish, which means it's too mushy, and in a regular boy-girl-mushy-sap-for-two-weeks-dump-'em-and-move-on kind of way. Thirdly, I think Artemis and Holly should be enough in character that you could recognize them without the names attached, which you did not accomplish, in my opinion. They could be any two characters from any teen drama. Artemis isn't formal enough, his vocabulary isn't stiff enough, Holly's not fiery enough, and she sighs too much.

Thank you and goodnight!