Good story, enjoyed it but I am confused. Why was Ro suspended with emma and Scott and what exactly did Scott do to Ro that began the mind wipe business?

That was a good story

I thought long and hard on just how I would leave this review. First off I enjoyed this story, I really did it was well written and the beginning was awesome. However I didnt like how you never explained just WHAT did Scott do to Storm that was so horrible he would violate her and Logan memories. It was like a tease that you glossed over and never fully explained. I dont like it when authors do that if you drop a major bomb like that, just have the curtesy to atleast explain it within the next few chaps! Please!? I am dying to know I even back tracked to see if I missed anything and the only clue to what I think happened was in a conversation that Jean and Scott had some chapters before hand. Other than that I did like this story :-)

apples

Ps. Seriously though what heck happened? Lol

Second time reading this
Quite a read

Even though there were times I was thoroughly confused in this story, I'm glad I stuck with it. It was a wonderful story. I started it and sat and read the whole thing straight through, I couldn't put it down!

Thanks again for another wonderful story!

This story was amazing! You really need to write a sequel to this! The whole story(as a whole) was very well-rounded, there were no confusing parts, at all! You have a gift, and when I get some connections with any directors or screenplays writers for films (when I do), with your permission, I could possibly make you film dream, if you have one, come true! You are totally awesome and keep writing your amazing stories! Peace, Love, and Happiness:):D:):D

That was an amazing story! confusing at times, but great! I loved it so much! is there a sequel? I WANNA KNOW IF THE BABY IS A GIRL OR A GUY! xD

s-w-e-e-t. but i think the wolverine being married twice is too much. (once is lucky, but twice?)

I kinda... hmm... I'm confused.

After chapter one I kinda... Hm...

You need more detail, and you cannot mix present and past tense in the same sentence.

This might help

story was ok, but just felt let down at the end. what did scott and emma do? there's this big mystery that tore them apart but it was never solved. big let down

A lovely ending for a wonderful story. I don't think the end was too sappy, I thought it was perfect. I hope to read more good stories from you. I plan to read your new story soon. It's just that I'm working on my own stories right now, oh by the way one of my stories has Ororo/Storm in it maybe you'll like it. It's basically a Teen Titan story but Storm's a main character. Maybe you can take a look at and tell me what you think.

gracefulraven,

out!

Interesting chapter, as usual. Can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder what happens between Logan and Storm, and who is the kid by? Please reveal all in the next chapter or soon.

gracefulraven,

out!

I had a few guesses as to what Scott did but after this chapter, it seems a little more enforced but doubtable... but I'm liking the way the story is going, but all the suspense is killing me, haha.

Well, I just hope things work out for Roro & Logan in the end...

Loved it! Kind of confusing but interesting. What per say did Cyclops do to Ororo? Will we find out in the next chapter? What did Wolverine have to do with it? I'm dieing to know.

gracefulraven,

out!