| Reviews for Retribution |
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   wotumba1 chapter 8 . 1/29/2018 glad the danger is over for now... |
| wotumba1 chapter 5 . 1/29/2018 LOL love your disclaimers! |
| nanuka02 chapter 8 . 7/19/2017 One of the most interesting, compelling, gripping stories I've read! I wish we'd seen more of Charlie towards the end, but that's ok. You really have a knack with words, and you write great dialogue! |
| Anka chapter 8 . 8/19/2014 love it XD |
| Cutter12 chapter 8 . 7/13/2011 Great Don angst in this story. I liked how Larry figured that he should go to Don. And, your disclaimers were pure gold. Thanks! |
| epalladino chapter 8 . 2/7/2009 Interesting story. Thanks, Beth |
| Sushi Chi chapter 8 . 11/6/2006 Great story! I really liked it a lot. |
| The Silent Rumble chapter 8 . 9/1/2006 this is giong in my favs. great work! |
| A Thing For Brothers chapter 1 . 5/6/2006 This is gonna be good. I can't wait to read the rest! |
| Aurian's Flame chapter 8 . 1/20/2006 Loved it! And even the Diclaimers were good. Usually it's just some boring drabble of "I don't own them", "I wish I did", "If I did I wouldn't be writing on this site", or even "We all know how this works by now". You actually had fun with it. Hope to read more! |
| Aurian's Flame chapter 7 . 1/20/2006 once again, incredibly good with action scenes and definitely reactions. This could honestly become an actual episode. |
| Aurian's Flame chapter 6 . 1/20/2006 PERFECT LARRY! You got him exactly and that's a hard thing to do most of the time. McShea's gonna get it - hehehe - |
| Aurian's Flame chapter 5 . 1/19/2006 I like the Allen characterization. Very well done. Dream sequence is fun, usually are. Music box idea, cool. |
| Aurian's Flame chapter 4 . 1/19/2006 Very good at cliffhangers. Love 'em! |
| Aurian's Flame chapter 3 . 1/19/2006 Megan! The plot thickens. - cruel chuckle - |
