ohh leon, why are you so shmexy?

Ah-freakin-Mazing story ] you did them justice.

Keep on writing! This is a good story!

i think the story wa amazing. i really enjoy all the teen love agnst, because i'm just a teen in love thats full of agnst. you make reading fun. i need a life.

this story has great potential. i like how you connect to a side character in KH. You make her come alive through young, modern descriptive language in your own way even though the time periods you have set are completely different from those of KH. I wish this had another chapter though. Do continue.

awe.

ha lmao the life size moogle thing was funny. and o yuffie got slapped...ouch! i love squaffies! i love writing them myself. I've writen a few if u wanna check them out. and it did had some humor in it. and i want yuffie and leon took hook up in KH2 but i doubt its gonna happen...leon looks younger and hotter in kh2...damn! lol. Yuffie looks awesome as ever. and so does cloud...

I like it! please write more!

this is really good. I'm glad I read it. You should continue it or write another short one or something.