Aww, that's so cute! I like the monologue, but maybe it's just b/c I'm a sucker for people finding out (even if secretly) their true loves' feelings. Or maybe it's b/c I monologue to myself every morning. Either way yours was really good. It gives insight into Ed's goal and when I look at the way he joined Al w/ such a different face, I have to wonder who exactly is the one wearing the armor.

I wish I played Kingdom Hearts b/c then I could read your fics and understand them. As it is, this is the only one I knew anything about. Your sister's are really good and she suggested I check out yours, so here I am and sadly one is all I can muster for you. But you're a great writer and I can see everything you have in here. Mine are kinda lacking in that respect, but that's that, I suppose. Broken record! Well, it was touching to read.

Aw :D

That was indeed touching! I love their brotherly bond. This was lovely. My only nitpick is that Ed seemed to say 'Al' a whole lot while he was doing his soliloquy. Ah well. XD

Nice idea, and you did a good job with Ed. He's never been one for being outright with his feelings, especially when they're feelings of that nature. Now, anger is another story. :p

Anyway, well done!