Awesome story! Really, I loved it!

One thing though, a small one; in chapter one, you say "Two flies, one stone." The English expression is "kill two birds with one stone" so "Two birds, one stone" would be more appropriate!

Otherwise; lovely!

AW! I loved this! I don't know how you don't have more reviews, so far this is the best chastine I've read. You know, I just didn't get a romantic vibe between john and angela, and I see A LOT of potential for this pairing instead! Great job! As I said already, I loved this-Chas was PERFECT! And John? SEXY!

ah i love it plz update soon!

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Hahahaha, I could just SEE the face of Beeman all trough the 3th chapter. I also loved how you made Chas silly at first in the beginning of the 2nd. And the ending was good as well, well done. So, it's just a great story! :P

How was that an ending? Huh? How the hell was that an ending? That was an ending to a chapter, and then you write another chapter starting with Constantine disposing of those pesky pants and continuing with lots of interesting stuff occurring in a bathtub. Lots of stuff. Do you not understand how this works? *screams in frustration*

Other than the immature conclusion, the story was very well done. Good writing, good characterization...very interesting, funny in bits...loved it.

It was cute!

Bah, I hate logging in! Im so lazy. *bounces*

Playful banter, Chas is confused, John's an asshole, there was booze, and IT WAS FRIGGEN WELL WRITTEN! My new favorite! Update plese.

Methinks you'd get more review if you let anny people review... Did you set it that way yourself for a reason? If so, then, yeah, um... _ Love the story.

I really like the way you've built up tension right from the beginning, and kept it going right up to the end. I think you've really captured the characters and their speech. You are the funny banter goddess!

Please write more fic!

I hope there's more! Update soon!