Reviews for It's Addictive
DJ Rodriguez chapter 21 . 10/18/2019
Okay got to say this... AWESOME! This is just incredible! Ron has got the ladies all amped up on all levels, and now it seems he has become a Monkey King of sort... and all Hell is about to break loose when the "Man That Can Send The Women Into Heaven" is gone! Oh boy... when they DO catch him... will it be a royal rumble to remember?

Keep it up!
Bobtrumpet chapter 21 . 6/10/2016
Geeze! Another one left unfinished. sob Hopefully all is well with you and you are just taking a hiatus. Or that you are ok and just quit writing. If you have not stopped, it would be greatly appreciated if you would finish these two Addictive stories. Following. Thank you.
Guest chapter 21 . 8/7/2013
please update this fanfic
theotherdave chapter 5 . 12/21/2011
One of my all time favorite stories by you. Hopefully you are still active so you can update this and other stories soon once you take care of writers block, reality and the plot bunny
Fox Boss chapter 21 . 5/22/2010
HAHAHA! Genius, pure Genius! Update this, OR ELSE!
Midgarosormr chapter 21 . 9/30/2009
Oh god, this is so funny! I was laughing so loud I got told to shut up! XD

You've got to continue this!

~

Mike.
theotherdave chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
This story is in dire need of an update, lol.
That Swedish Guy chapter 21 . 6/20/2009
I know it must take a special setting on the Insano-Meter to write this, but please? Please concider finishing this. Its just too much fun to be left without an ending. :D
warprince2000 chapter 21 . 5/13/2009
That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)
powerplay1 chapter 21 . 1/4/2009
LOVING IT! I have enjoyed this story and Addictive 2 tremendously. Please continue with the hilarity. I was disappointed when you were about to end it quickly but this...this is MUCH better as it is a laugh a second. Congratulations on such a great literary creation. Please don't forget about your other stories too as they have been entertaining as well.
BenRG chapter 21 . 1/4/2009
All I can say is 'smart Ron'! He is making tracks whilst the girls are busy running all over GJ looking for him. Where will he go...? Hmm... Maybe he can BEG Mr. Dr. P. to send him to a 'Black hole deep'. XD Either that or he has gone to ask Sensei exactly how he suggests that he undo this mess.

I loved poor Shego's situation. I wonder how far up the list she got before her brain fritzed out (IIRC, Kim lasted until no. 23)? I also doubt that neither she or Dr. Director will be in a fit state to do anything for weeks, possibly months. :p

The OC of Little Mary is incredibly funny in her own way. I wonder how many unexpected friendships this mess will end up having brought about or broken.

You know, about five chapters back, you promised that there were only two chapters and an epilogue to go. I think that I speak for all your fans when I say: How long now?

BenRG's Rating: 7.5/10
bigherb81 chapter 21 . 1/3/2009
Well I must say nothing like some random chaos to round out an evening. To bad wade got caught though. Great job on this chapter too, ejoyed the little scene with Little Mary and the rest of the girls. Nothing like a sneak attack on the knees to bring down a giant. Looking forward to the next chapter to see where Ron went and exactly what happened between him and Shego.
theotherdave chapter 21 . 1/3/2009
Nice to see an update to one of my old favorites
cabrera1234 chapter 21 . 1/3/2009
is ron really doing it to the girls or is it someone else.
Nightwing 509 chapter 21 . 1/3/2009
I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you had GJ Headquarters look as if it had become a nut house. Please update soon.
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