~Holy, shitttttt!~ -Jigmario

dang max grew... not happy bout that

i wish Max got his memory qwq

I just read this one chapter cuz it was recommended on the internet and I might have to go back and read the whole story at this is hilarious and funny

giovannis severed head said nothing to this,
because it was a bloody severed head
hahaha!

One day, may,max,ash, and Brock were going to the gym. “How much longer?” Asked max. “Only a little longer” said may. “:(“ said max. “Only 2 more years till I’m gonna be a trainer” said max. “ hey max, LETS RACE!” Said may. -zoooooom-. They ran and ran down the hill. “Bang!” Max bumped into something. No, it was a someone! “Owww” said the girl. “Bonnie?” Said ash. “Ugggggg” Said may, “ not another person!” “ wow bonnie! You grew taller!(not me or max because of some wish)”. “ yeah, I have a fennakin” said Bonnie. Later, everyone was getting ready for bed. Max and ash went into the forest to find some berries.” What’s that?” Asked max pointing to a yellow stone. He picked it up and it started to glow. “AHHHHH” said max. -BOOM- a giant yellow light spred across the forest. “Ummm...max, I think you are shrinking”. Max indeed was shrinking and he grew some fur too! “ help me ash! I am becoming a-“ screamed max. “Pika pika pi!” Said max. Ash ran holding the furry boy in this arms and went to the tent layout. “Guys! It wasn’t me this time!” Said ash. “Umm what are you talking about?” Asked Bonnie. “And what’s that’s small pikachu doing here if YOUR pikachu is on the log?” Asked may. “ that’s my point! This pikachu is max!” Said ash. “AHHHHHHH” screamed everybody. How is that possible? Maybe because of the stone. “Awwwww ️ Max is sooo cute!” -no I am NOT- said max to the Pokémon. -max, how did you become a Pokémon?- Asked treeko. -well, I dunno, I touched a yellow rock...!- dun dUN DUN!

Continue. Why stop t..t

holy... i love this chapter a bit long but still great!

that registeel joke got me XD

Well, this is an okay series but here is my problem: the memory loss.
I'm sorry, but I've always hated it when they lose their memories. Like everyone said, it feels like you're just killing of these characters and replacing them with another one. But here's my main problem with it. See, every time I read a pokemon transformation story that ends with memory loss I can't help but get angry for a few reasons. For starters, I spent the entire story building up a connection with this character, only to see that it's all for nothing since they pretty much forget their entire lives just so they can follow the will of who or what ever changed them. Oh, and that's another problem with it. The reasons for changing it are so stupid.
Ex.1
Cause for change: I wanna have sex with you
Protagonist: Well you can't.
Cause for change: memory loss.
Protagonist: Oh yes! Harder!
Ex.2
Cause for change: I want you to torture humans
Protagonist: Well I won't
Cause for change: memory loss
Protagonist: You humans will pay for your sins!
See what I mean. Some of these are actually pretty good, but the memory loss always throws me off.

How do I add?

This is one of those transformation sequences that I wish was a comic on DeviantArt or had an animated adaptation on YouTube. The music from the scene in "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory" where violet turns into a blueberry would match this story perfectly.

I stopped reading this when it cussed.

Awesomeness!

please update this fic with a new chapter i cant wait to read what happens next