Nice new cute story, mate!

Good story, ugga, ugga! Caveman say continue! Or get et up by big lizards! Ugga!

ive never heard of them. Nor can i find a pic of them. could you possible send me a link? im dying to know! Good story too.

good story so happens to needles?

You know what? I like this. (see not everyone hates it) I mean, if I didn't I'd leave the story and forget about it. I wouls like to read more.

Pretty cool! Helena sounds like a doll version of Amy Lee. Which is actually what I thought when I read her description. Please continue!

I liked the story. It is a great one on how needles got his mouth shut.

I love it, it's exaclent... more more... tell me... I'll get iy out of you... Sun I want more... Sun Lynn Moonlight, I most have more of your story, I'm in love with it... KILLER BAT! DUDE RUN!... whyed I type that... never mind, what was with Tlaloc, was he triking them with that whole he loved some one befor thing? hey I type like I talk A LOT... why do I talk so much... who caares that has nothing to due with anything... I love this Fanfic, I wish mine was as good... I like TLALOC! he's so awsum... and mean... I like mean people... why is that, I don't like people who are mean to me but I love evil people in video games... Yayness, Fluff, hey I stole your word, right, what happens next, I love Needles getting in trobal... I have no clue why... anyhow, good story