| Reviews for Hellspawn |
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Yura-chan chapter 2 . 8/1/2008 I like the concept and the story, would love it evne more with longer chapters! _ |
Akatsuki King chapter 2 . 7/16/2008 Interesting... I look forward to future readings. |
Sumofl chapter 2 . 9/16/2007 awesome update soon |
MysteryLady-Tx chapter 2 . 5/21/2007 interesting, but now I have to wonder of when the Yondaime is going to be coming in... THANKS:D |
MysteryLady-Tx chapter 1 . 5/21/2007 interesting beginning, so Naruto now sees his reflection as that of Kyuu Can't wait to see where you will take this:D |
Uniden chapter 1 . 5/19/2007 I first reviewed this over a year ago, and honestly can't remember what the plot was about. You have an excellent writing style, and though the chapters could be longer there's no reason you can't write an enjoyable story in the style and length of the first chapters. Update when you can. I am curious as to how the story and plot develop. |
Shea Loner chapter 2 . 5/19/2007 *blinks* this was different the last time I read it. . hm, honestly I preferred the other version. so much more believable. In this one, I don't know the use of a quest to complete a sword? it seems, sorry, amateurish . *sigh* I prolly should have reviewed the first time round my apologies. Good luck with your writings. SL |
Nomanic chapter 2 . 5/19/2007 I'm glad that you decided to continue with this story. If you need me to do anything contact me. ;) |
your knight in tinfoil armor chapter 2 . 2/21/2006 nice |
Lone Wolf Pup chapter 3 . 12/14/2005 I hope you update soon i want to see what happens next |
Questioneer chapter 3 . 12/7/2005 Uh, are your later chapters going to be longer? I hope so. You are a great writer. |
Merkitten chapter 3 . 11/30/2005 This storys great so far! the only thing I can think of sugesting would be to make the chapters longer, Tis really annoying to have to read about half a page then wait for the next Half a page, so Please make the next chaps a little longer Arigatou Gozaimasu -Merkitten |
isthisparadise chapter 3 . 11/22/2005 this is a really good story please update soon. |
reiko the black lighting chapter 3 . 11/16/2005 what is it? soul edge or somethig |
RaitenKitsune chapter 3 . 11/13/2005 cant wait for the next chapter |