Reviews for Midrift adrift or, Crop Top Caper
MissRandomFreak chapter 3 . 12/29/2012
OhmyGod, this whole thing was sooooooo cute. Like omg.
Muzzlehatch chapter 3 . 3/25/2012
Going back over some of your old ones, Rye. This was sweet.
KageOkami-Kogo chapter 3 . 1/31/2011
Hilarious and cute... and I LOVE that you used ivymae457's fanart XD very awesome, she's an amazing artist :)

I wish there was more to this though! :
XyKPfan chapter 3 . 12/14/2007
WOW! I so luv this fic! I am so adding you to my Favorite Authors List! Promise! I'm nout' to go get my hubby and put lil' Trevon down for a nap...This was a damn good story and I look forward to reading more of your fic's. Have a wonderful evening!

P.S. I'm gonna be outta town from 12/20/07-1/12/07. There's weak singal where I'm going so I may not be able to R&R as often as I can. Plus, with the baby I don't have as much time as I usually do. So I'm doing all I can now. Peace. I gotta go. seriously. Good Night.
laura1990 chapter 3 . 12/2/2006
this story is great...

i like it because i also have a boyfriend who rocks, and always make me laugh, just like ron.

i'm one of the Student Council and i'm a cheerleader.

i had lots of fun reading this story.

i i fell to the ground laughing at what Ron did in school...

thanks for writting this great story,

cya,

LAURA ROGGERS.
CastaS chapter 3 . 11/5/2006
great story, i enjoyed it much. excellent
Larie-chan chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
I've seen the pic and I like what you've done. Good job!
kpfan203 chapter 3 . 3/18/2006
that was the best story I ever read. WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!
HeavyMetal84 chapter 3 . 3/18/2006
Good chapter,very when u .
Ace Ian Combat chapter 2 . 1/13/2006
Pretty good.
zipporahvulcan chapter 2 . 1/5/2006
I was doing a search, and just found you had added a chapter 2 to your story. I thought chapter 1 was a perfect gem, nicely done with a nice ending, great fun.

Chapter 2 was also well done and I enjoyed it. Just wanted to mention that quotation marks were missing from Ron's paragraph that starts:

I'm feasting my eyes

It's a beautifully written paragraph, and the missing quotation marks take away from it just a bit as the reader needs to refocus and realize that these are Ron's spoken words. I loved the whole exchange between Ron and Kim at the restaurant and at the park.
Ramonet Blade chapter 2 . 11/29/2005
Ausgeseichnet!

I humbly await your next installment.
HeavyMetal84 chapter 2 . 11/28/2005
Thank you for adding a 2nd there be a 3rd .

I only had one little problem with this chapter.I am a Christian and I can certanly say that not all christian's have the same opinion on the subject's mentioned in this chapter.

This is not a flame by any forward to your next Kim Possible story.
JPMod chapter 2 . 11/27/2005
Aw! A great dose of K/R fluff. Sweet and touching and loving. I can never get enough K/R fluff. :)

(chuckle) I noticed you've used another of Ivy's K/R art in your story - Ron's bellybutton hair with Kim rubbing it and Bonnie gagging over the entire scene. As I said, it's great to read good fics associated with the great K/R arts I've seen. :)

Keep up the good work! I'm enjoying your stories! :)
captainkodak1 chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
You beat me to it but no problem there. I loved this pic and am glad someone did a fic on it. You did a great job. Keep up the great work.
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