I liked your story of Sark's history. I'm not sure what their relationship is at the end but am glad they are together without Vaughn in the picture. Don't you think the fortune should have included a proverb or word of wisdom in addition to the numbers? I'd like to think that Vaughn meets someone and has a happy 3rd marriage. You have great wriing style. Thanks for sharing!

Normally song lyrics in fics totally turn me off. Like, I will stop reading a story I find it so irritating. But I stuck it out with this and I'm so glad I did! I love the ending. It feels finished but also like there could easily be another forty chapters. (Which I would love)

This story has shown completely different sides to Sydney, Sark, and even Vaughn, but despite it not being what I would normally read it drew me in and I really enjoyed it. I liked exploring this new look at the characters and the plot, not to mention the pull Sydney felt to Sark and how she felt things were just too different with Vaughn... It's been an interesting story and I liked it.

Thanks for a great fic.

This is one of my favorite Sarkney stories. No matter how patient Vaughn is I doubt he can go up against Sark and Sydney and win.

“One Night in Sydney"

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love it!

This story is *sweet*

Exceptionally well written, great plot, and well organized. You expect a certain level of intelligence from your readers, which is respectable.

Fantastic story! I loved the plot, how it all seemed so believable. Sark's character was particularly well written. I like it that you didn't make him go all soft on the outside. Well done on completing the story!

Wow! You have an amazing imagination! The way you used the entire history of Alias to weave this wonderful story... just brillant!

The character interaction was well written, the storyline was brillant. It is a shame that there was a resolution so quick. She only wanted money (which is fair enough), but what about the build up with Daniel Well? I thought that Sark and him would have a one-on-one and Sark would reinforce his superiority. And I didn't like how Sydney seemed to be caught so easily, twice. Oh well, as I said, great character development and storyline.

I love your preference to a Sark/Sydney match, rather then Sydney/Vaughn.

I love your stories, this one especially.

Please write more.

Cheers ;)

woah, this is an amazing story you've spun. Update soon!

what a way to end it! i read and reread the line you quoted and simply couldn't believe that she sent that to him!

i mean he was so right in thinking that the cruel package came from sark, but it came from her and just wow...

this chapter is probably the best written vaughn that i have read. i can't stand him and even i felt...something...for him.

i can't believe it's over, but then is it?

awesome work!

~Sara~

that was so beautiful. and they are together! well sort of. the time jump got me. i just can't believe that his mom just let them go and they ran away together.

how wonderful. the riding was so detailed. i felt syd's sore muscles it was so well written.

can't wait to see what else is happening to them.

~Sara~

woo hoo! i love the bit in the car! she flicked his ear. giggled aloud at that.

i am still at a loss where you are heading with irina. i really don't believe she was just using him for only the money. just seems beneath her somehow, but i'll just be patient.

love when you do multiple chap updates cause i'm off to read more.

~Sara~

damn!

ok majorly freaky last para, the fortune cookie an all that i mean! ;)

def cant wait ta read the next part - please post it soon!

i seriously am in awe of your writing capabilities - how you can write so much, so well, an in such a short space of time! - i praise you totalle! :P

steph

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