Reviews for Waiting in the Wings
InkWeaverabc chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
Loved Neville to bits, felt sorry for Lavender, wasn't keen on the ending ;) but well-written and mildly enjoyable :P (I feel I can be anaemic about this one because I'm gushing all over your other ones xD
the last time chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
it's really, really good. i had this little smile on my face the whole time i was reading this :) i love that someone else appreciates neville as well as me, i always thought he was an awsome charector - and this last book prove that to the world! i'd never thought about lavender much - JKR doesn't really mention her - but i like how you've portrayed her, and i like her with neville. i think you've really raised the bar with this little snapshot, and i look forward to reading more things like this :)
mysteriouslife chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
oh! wow! great twist! i first thought that he was talking about liking hermione, but he liked lavender the whole time! wow! cant wait to read the sequel! :D i'm sure it will be just as good :)
Prytania chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
Loved it. You really portrayed the characters beautifully.
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
This was brilliant! So much so that I can't possibly relay how much I enjoyed it! GO, NEVILLE!

Thank you for writing a story in which he is strong and caring, not that he isn't already! _

You did an excellent job on this, and therefore, should be very proud! Keep up the amazing work, and Happy Christmas! U *U*

Ever-so sincerel signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)
JJ Rust chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
Another great one. I loved the dialogue between Neville and Lavender. I think a lot of people just saw Lavender as a trollup in HBP, but you actually turned her into a human being you can feel somewhat sorry for. And I liked how assertive Neville got with her when he told Lavender that Ron and Hermione were always meant to be. And the line about Hermione being "too bossy" for Neville was classic. Laughed at that one.

You captured both their personalities well and also presented another side of Lavender to the reader.

Keep up the good work.
Moonprincess92 chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Neville/Lavender ... such an interesting pairing. I had to say that i liked it. A lot. I love Neville and i personally reakon he deserves more than what he's got. Shot. D
Katia Dashwood chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
I'm glad to see a fic in which the author considers the whole Ron/Lavender situation from her point of view and the fact that Ron used her. And I think that comforting Lavender is just the sort of thing that Neville would do. :)
BDP chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Yer i really enjoyed this - i 1st read your Godsmaked on CM - followed you here and found this gem - :D
Evil-Angel-911 chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
Neville seemed slightly too confident. Thats not Neville really in my opinion. yes, he is brave and sensitive but we'd have approuched it slightly different I think. I would have probably seen a different interaction between the pair than this but the writing is nice about Hermione and Ron. I think that what Neville said is true, no one really has a shot at either of them.
fantasticarla chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
oh that is so cute! please do an epilogue! i love this! aww neville..
Pandora of Ithilien chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
i like neville... and you're right. people do tend to overlook neville.
Bagge chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
Sweet story. You know - I believe you. They could really make it work. Definately a good description of Nevile.
Dizi 85 chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
oh, more lav/nev PLEASE

its so cute!
Heptagon chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
Another wonderful story of yours. Compliments on the way you describe the characters and their personalities. I've always thought there's something more to Neville, and I'm glad you show him that way. But even more I like reading about Lavender - a somewhat forgotten and overlooked person. While everyone is happy that Hermione & Ron finally got together, not many seem to consider Lavender and her feelings.

Lovely story, very well written & pleasent to read. :)
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