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What is illigumency ? - if you mean the technic where Snape use the spell legilimens then you made the wrong one - legilimens comes from latin legere (to read) and mens (spirit/mind). There is no illigu (to combine) in it.

Do you read your story proof ? There are so many slips of pen like "she STOKED the bird" in stead of "STROKED" etc.

bonne fic!

Damn that nosy Hermy Ninny - as Viktor calls her.
WHY does she always demand to know everything?

Has no one ever said to her that it is NONE OF HER BUSINESS?
Apparently not!

The word "cavalier" means "unfeeling" or "posed" - so why is Sean described that way in this story? It's just one of the many grammar, word use, and spelling errors that make the story unpleasant.

I had hopes - a Muggle monk coming to train Harry? Harry's infatuation with Ginny caused by Voldemort? Those seemed like promising plot twists.

But I don't have the patience to read more of the bad prose to find out if the story actually works or not. Kind of sad - a good editor might have helped turn a good idea into a great story!

Wow! this was a very damn good story i really enjoyed this and i plan on reading it again in the future. Again congrats on a damn good story

why do people writing perfectly good fan fiction insist on screwing it up by throwing Hermione into the love interest role.

Enjoyed your story a lot. Cheers! :D

illigumency? you must be kidding me, buddy.

great story i look forward to reading the sequel.

cel

I am so glad I found this story AFTER it was finished!It is not one to be read piece meal! How frustrating! Once you begin on your tale the ONLY thing that Matters is the button you push for the NEXT CHAPTER! The story is imaginative and very creative. Your descriptions are so RICH and VIBRANT!(Just like youe were there as an observer.) I am truly grateful that you left it up! I think if you could find a theme you have the makings of an AUTHOR! I just wish that you had found other ideas to write about. Thank you for sharing!

This is possibly the coolest, greatest, most wonderful Harry Potter story that I have read since the books. Seriously. I cried like a baby when they got there medals, *sighs* and when Ginny met Sean outside on Christmas. AWESOME! I love all the history and background stories you put in, I just love it. Excellent superb work:) *raises both thumbs*

OMG, I don't want to stop, but I have to go and do some chores. Mow my neighbors lawn etc etc. But when I am done I am going to come back and finish:)

Oh my, I just came upon this story, and can only get this far...for now;) But I will continue reading, once my head ache has gone away. So far I LOVE it and can't wait to read more:)

This was a very nice story. I enjoyed it.