Reviews for Butterflies
jess.c.kong chapter 6 . 1/23/2015
That was a really nice companion piece to B&I! And you did a great job of weaving both stories together. I especially liked the scene with Iruka and Naruto since that was a new scene for the B&I story. And I don't know what you are worried about?..both lemons were extremely well written and hot! Definitely can't help cringing at defiling Iruka's classroom but it was for a good cause! Lol...but seriously, the tender moments were just as sweet as the smut ones! Can't wait to read more of your work!
blaleblelelel chapter 3 . 3/1/2014
Loved the chapter! I like that they are teasing Sasuke and I loved the ending scene! I'm going to assume that the scene where Naruto goes around asking the villagers is going to be in the main story? I hope so, it sounded pretty interesting. :D
blaleblelelel chapter 2 . 3/1/2014
Loved it! Iruka blushing is so cute, and I just loved the kissing scene, Naruto barging in like that and the ending scene made me chuckle! xD
blaleblelelel chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
This is interesting. Once I'm done reading this I'm going to go read the main fic, it sounds pretty interesting. :)
Guest chapter 6 . 9/21/2013
LOVE THISS STORY GREAT JOB
ActuallyNevis chapter 6 . 5/25/2011
I liked this a lot! Great story!
al3n3a chapter 6 . 5/30/2009
I loved this story. I really enjoyed reading it, you're a great writer. Thanks for sharing!
finn the zombie chapter 6 . 4/12/2009
Your smut writing is really good! Even if it's a bother to go to the different website, it's worth it.
finn the zombie chapter 5 . 4/12/2009
Definitely shows how deeply Iruka cares for Kakashi, despite fearing what the homophobic villagers would think.
finn the zombie chapter 4 . 4/12/2009
Read it on LJ; it is "legal" to put that on FanFiction, just with warning and M rating. It was very good anyway!
finn the zombie chapter 3 . 4/12/2009
Iruka and Kakashi really do make a great gay couple!
finn the zombie chapter 2 . 4/12/2009
Yay~ for the utter fluff that is KakaIru! Kakashi has serious reaction skills, though, if he can pull up his mask that quickly!
finn the zombie chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
(Just a note- -sensei is used when you're talking to YOUR teacher, not A teacher. I doubt Kakashi has taught Iruka... yet... *grins evilly*)
Seshat7 chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
Kya...! This is so cute! it! As much as I love B&I. Oh your good, too damn good! Gokurou!
naptownbaby chapter 6 . 6/17/2007
very hot nice story.
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