Reviews for Heart of Gold: Rayne style |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Totally amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. Glad he's back with her. And Mal and Inara are together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. Will read the rest later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey this is the 4th story of yours I've read! LOVE your writing style and imagination! |
![]() ![]() It was an interesting story, but it really bugged me how you echoed exact dialogue from the series. You also did it a lot, which bugged me, because it felt like you couldnt come up with dialogue yourself. All I'm saying is that in the future you might want to be more creative. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such Ana amazing story! I loved every bit of it from the amazingly sweet to the gut wrenching angst. I really believe that Jayne and River would be an end game. He can handle her crazy and she can handle him. You said it perfectly when you stated that Jayne does everything to the extreme. He would love fiercely. Just wanted you to know how amazing and well written I found this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just want to read it over nd over again ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() deffinintly needs a sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice story, thanks so much for sharing it. Jayne and River's dependency on each other is a little frightening, but I think it rings true with what we know about the 2 of them. Neither one of them would be able to go into a relationship with anything less than total concentration. I like that Jayne centers River and she makes him realize that he can open himself up to someone without being weak. I am heading to your author's page in hopes there is a sequel where we might be to see what would happen in this new version when the Operative comes after River. Or just another adventure would also be great. Thanks so much for your story. Happy writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, I read your story for the first time a long time ago actually. You see, I was in the mood for something nostalgic, so when I went looking for a story to read I did so in the collection of favorite stories I have accumulated on this sight. And 'Heart of Gold: Rayne style' was one of them. I just wanted to let you know that it was every bit as delightful and fun to read the second time as it was the first. Hope your inspiration is still flying free. |