| Reviews for Why is Hermione Acting like Lavender? |
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mundungy chapter 11 . 7/22/2013 nevvvvviiiiillllle |
GonnaBitchAboutChu chapter 2 . 10/26/2011 Honey, you have got to be the WORST fanfic writer in the history of the universe. |
ForHeavensSake chapter 3 . 10/2/2011 Hey, I think the idea of your story is pretty good but I think your writing have to improve. Okay, I admit I just read it to the third chapter but I simply couldn't read on. There are no details and no explanations. The whole "Why did I catch her? I must like her." is way to fast and unrealistic. I mean there was no encounter between them before, not really anyway. I don't mean to insult you and please don't be angry with me but the meaning of a review is to tell you the readers opinion and I don't think that it would do you any good if I'm telling you what a great author you are when it is not really true. |
voldyismyfather chapter 12 . 12/2/2010 oooo love it x |
Lil Ray Of GloomShine chapter 10 . 10/3/2009 NEVILLE! NO! He he I overreacted a tad bit then didn't I? J x |
Lil Ray Of GloomShine chapter 8 . 10/3/2009 The problem was that neither of them could sleep Hahahaha. Mind meet gutter. Gutter meet mind! J x |
Madame Loxgar chapter 12 . 3/5/2007 OH MY GOD! THAT WAS AWESOME! A couple of gammar mistakes but it was still AWESOME! Please write more stories like that please! |
bookworm070190 chapter 12 . 1/14/2007 that was amazing and what i liked most is that its fast paced |
Playing With Matches chapter 1 . 1/12/2007 A little far fetched, don't you believe? The opening scene was stretching it a little far. Why would she dare her to do something for a year? How many people do you know of play truth or dare over instant messaging? I certainly havent. Of course, that could be just me and there could be a whole cult of instant messaging truth or dare gamers that I am un aware of, but seriously. |
boblovespotter chapter 3 . 10/21/2006 o wats goin on between the new girl and arry (l0l) o! |
Dramionelvr chapter 12 . 10/21/2006 the stopry was OK i feel it was a bit rushed and in need of details but the plot was good. |
AtahulpaGal chapter 12 . 7/31/2006 I really like the though it's your first sory it was really Job!:D |
Storm chapter 9 . 7/19/2006 Heyy it's me mistys_journey... What happened to Ginny and Blaise! |
x5x Nikki x5x chapter 2 . 7/14/2006 you made Hermione and Ginny sound so westernized... if you know what i mean... it's a bit OOC, but it's ok. i like the plot so far... |
x5x Nikki x5x chapter 1 . 7/14/2006 ... How can wizards have instant messaging? having computers requires science, not magic... unless they're not using computers... gah, nevermind. great job so far, though! |