I love this story! This is the best Yuffie x Cloud story I have read on this site. I really appreciate the fact that you kept everyone in character and it wasn't cheesy. Please update soon!

I don't think Cloud is truly suicidal. I think he knows and remembers some stuff that happened before. That happened to Soldier wasn't Sephiroth's fault. Hojo was the true villian. And helping the ancients. Aeris's people will help him a lot I think.

Nooooooo! You have to tell me how it ends!

Daaamn. I was so into this and it was so well written, but then...my paring was demolished *Cries* your a great writer though, just wish I had my cloti~

Lol unfortunately when I read fanfiction it's to satisfy a sick urge to see my favorite characters in a show or game come together. A sort of closure for my mental imaginings or fantasies. Still the craving is never satisfied so in essence there is no closure. Needless to say I was disappointed with your pairings of cloud and yuffie and Vincent and tifa because I was looking for a story where they are swapped (yuffentine/cloti). I suspect that many people dislike or refuse to read this story because of a similar reason. However this story is not only incredibly well written, but its also intriguing and exciting on so many levels. While I did stop reading at some point because I realized that this was not the type of fanfiction I was looking for, I loved your elaboration on aspects of the final fantasy 7 story that are not fully explored in the game. This is original and yet it makes sense and really ties into the game without being a total rehash on gaming material leaving a very original story. Well done! I would never leave a review for a story I didn't like.

Love the moment between Yuffie and cloud here. Great story.

I'm so happy you updated! This is one of my favorites to read.

Hopefully she's smart enough to give them something close but not necessarily what they want. It's complicated enough it shouldn't be to hard.

Getting very interesting. Setting things up in a very cool way. Getting rid of Jenova and possibly opening things up for space travel, and getting back in touch with traditional magics. Like Terra, and the others could use with the Magnacite in Final Fantasy 3/6.

Good chapter! Definite thumbs up, and even better that it's a CloudxYuffie fic! Not enough of them in my opinion!

Curious what keeps happening in this odyssey your writing.

I'm tell in ya, this is definitely one of the best, if not the best fanfic I've ever read. The writing is simply spectacular and the story fits so well together as if it were planned to be part of the game itself. I only started reading this recently but I cannot wait for the next chapter and the eventual end of the story. Definitely worth reading twice. I might!

Sometimes when I see Reeve I get confused who he is. lol. Then I remember Cait Sith was a robot.

Nice chapter. Curious how things will go with Cloud here. The whole thing with Soldier was messed up. Everyone in it was only in it because Hojo messed with there DNA. At least that seems to be the case from Crisis Core with Genesis, Angreal, etc... And of course everyone in Soldier having the glowing eyes. Still Cloud according to Hojo was unique in his DNA or something I remember. Curious where you take things. Keep it up.

I really can't wait to see what is happening underground city!

I hear the problem with the principal character thing. I think what you've done is fine though.

Cloud finding and helping the Cetra is very appropriate. The perfect way for Cloud to put not just put his troubled past behind him but pay tribute to the fallen like Aeris, Zack, Jesse, and all the other minor members of avalanche and people who died fighting Shinra as well.