cute! :D

I've just found this story and I think I do like it.

Plan to continue? I really hope you do.

that was good, really really good, i'm so adding to my alert list

great story

This is the best thing i've read for ages. All the emotion and character interplay is brilliantly worked out, and not an action seems wasted. The exposition is much more streamlined that it often is, so well done.

I get the impression you're working thing out as you go along? I think preparing a strong ending is always useful, but I'm sure I rely on planning far too much on occasions. I must mention in this chapter that the last pargraph seems a bit disconected; nothing another once-over wouldn't solve.

Needless to say, PLEASE, carry this on a long time.

That was really good!

Sniff! That was really quite lovely.

Just wanted you to know that this is a great story. I read the first three chapters and then waited . . .

I loved this chapter and my mind is racing with ideas for further developments. If you would like a muse, partner, or any other such thing, email me. I'd love to see this story progress!

That was amazingly touching! Keep going!

It was great of course! I have been looking forward to an update for a while!

Aww. Very sweet ... and I'm unable to predict where the story is going, which - I suppose - is a Good Thing. :)

Very well done!

I knew it was going to be good after I read this: "He carried her from across the castle. She’s heavy, and he’s out of shape."

(Very Colonel Brandon carrying Marianne in Sense and Sensibility)

I also loved: ("Oh, bloody hell.” Neville groaned, “Luna, why didn’t you say anything?”

“Oh!” She sounded startled by the idea. “I thought you wanted to carry her.”)

And I love Titus. I love the honesty. He reminds me of Dr. House.

And I love Luna, but you know that.

And I loved her dreams, it reminded me of the Palantir in Return of the King.

This is an awesome story! I love how you've written all the characters, especially Neville, since I'm just fascinated by him. This story is definitely one of my favorites!

This is really, really, good. I'm always excited when I see you've updated!

Great start to the story! Everyone's in character. Looking forward to the next chapter!