this story is the most descriptive and i can acknowledge that you are an awesome and inspiring writer. and would look forward to you continued with Harvest Moon FanFics and will prosper with your writing.

Wow, this fic is amazing. I just kept coming back for more and more, wanting even better parts. And you fullfilled that. I think you have a great hand in writing and should continue writing stories. I wish that could happen to me in my game...stupid cows..

Alas! If only life was so simple...

Very nice. Harvest moon has got to be one of my favorite games ever. By random coincidence, you've also managed to use Karen, my favorite girl, and Cliff, the coolest dude. Good combination you've got here.

Naturally, I liked the fic. It's got plenty of detail, lots of introspection, and managed to keep all the characters in character. An excellent job.

All I can say, is I wish the game was as nice as your fic is. Wish I could hire half the town to work for me...

Nice job,

Rex

You're a terrific writer. This was so sweet and refreshing. A big change from the usual angsty stuff one finds nowadays.

Hats off to ya!

-this be The Karlminion, and he be signin' off-

Good to see you're still alive! :3 Good story! I don't often read Harvest Moon stories, but this one is pretty darn good! Keep it up!

Aww, how quaint.

Keep it like this, alright? Let it end happily, don't throw in some plot-bunny tragedy, ok? Please?

-this be The Karlminion, and he be signin' off-

That was funny, my friend. Let's just hope that married life for them is easier then it was today.

Again, good job.

-this be The Karlminion, and he be signin' off-

Wow. This has to be my favorite story in the harvest moon section. Awesome job.

Oh, happiness. I loved that part of the game, with the KIefu fairies and the vineyard. It was so... I don't know. But whatever it was, you've captured it perfectly. Hats off to ya.

-this be The Karlminion, and he be signin' off-

It's a great story. Every time i go on to this site i check to see if it has been updated first. Keep writing!

I LOVED this fanfic! 9/10! Write more, please! (It's about the best character of all time, you see)

Excelent few chapters you've got here. I wonder if the harvest goddess actually got things moving on the grapes. I hope you eventually find someone for Kai even though I'm dead set on a Jack/Karen story I'm just not feeling yet that Kai deserves to have no one in the end, maybe if he was in on some plan with Karen's father or beat Karen when he found out about her and Jack then i'd think he'd deserve what he's getting. Keep up the great work, and i'll keep on reading.

Wonderful story and well written. I wish the chapters were a little longer, but as long as you keep updating it i'll keep reading it. Keep up the good work, and i'll keep on reading.

You're moving a little fast, but beyond that, it's all good.

-this be The Karlminion, and he be signin' off-

So far, you're doing an awesome job of depicting Karen and the other characters. I never thought of Duke in the sense that he presented himself here, and I like the way you did it. I'm thoroughly enjoying myself with this one.

Can't wait for more.