Woah, this one is so deep. You must be a cool one, are you still doing this? Or just three chapters? Oh well, for me, it's great. Simple but great, continue improving. Or really cool? Naw, I think it's fine. Haha.

good job

This is... Wonderful, again.

So she's saying that he's kind-of like, half-Uchiha, because he's got only one Sharingan eye?

Anyway, this is fantastic.

i like the last one best..."twice as much red would mean you were an uchiha..." thats cool, half uchiha, half hatake.

I love the third one so much.

Interesting... PLease update soon.

There's a quietness to this fic that's very poignent, the details leap right out of the stillness. Like the colours on the mask, the way it takes shape and so on. I like how you ritualized the whole process, a series of steps that _must_ take place. It becomes an organization, almost an army, instead of a simple band of killers.

...my goodness, that was a ramble and a half, my intention was just to compliment your wonderful writing but this came out instead. Anyway, I look forward to seeing what else you write. _

i love the way u've written this. It's keeps me wanting more. I can't wait to c what comes next "Twice as much red would mean you were an Uchiha" awsome sounding and just seems to fit perfectly. Be waiting till next chapter

Very nice ficlets you have here. I'd love to see more.

RIN

Very nice indeed. If you like ItaKaka you should read Oneesan no Miroku Houshi's works. They are very very good.

Deep and cool... just like a swimming pool, or perhaps even the ocean, nice -