The chapter was good. Just the “Kelly clarkson” name threw me off a bit. Usually authors would credit to the song’s original artist in the A/N section not in the story itself.

Wonderful. Big round of applause to the tale.
The story was exceptional except for some minor misspells here and there. You did well on this first PotO fanfic.

Outstanding :)). Thumbs up.

Very good. I love the angsts.
You are very good at making this story gothic.

I still don’t get how Christine escaped the Moreau Manor

Good. I like it.
I see beauty and the beast and Jane eyre in your story.

Good chapter. Christine in this story seems to be weak eh. Not able to stand up for herself and not knowing what she wants eh?

The chapter was good but I was hoping it would be longer with more details on how Christine came to agree on taking music lessons with the phantom and trust him and became bonded with him. Plus details on her life and experience at the mansion, etc.

How did the phantom know her name?

Your poem was really good. You wrote it or was it from a song?

Wow so far so good.
I think you misspelled the word than in several sentences in the past chapters and this one.

Hi author, very interesting intro chapter.
Are you still around to read fanfics on this website? I just asked since I’m reading your story and not sure if you’re there to see my comments. If not, I’ll just keep my comments to myself.

I know that song, but I know a different version.
it goes like this:
the water is wide, I cannot get o'er
no wings have I, no wings have I to fly
give me a boat that would carry two, we both shall row, my friend and I.

as I look out , across the sea a bright horizons beckons me
and I am called to do my best, and be the most that I can be.

then repeat the first verse, then its over.

Quite well written!

Ah, bit you draw TVE angst well!