Please . I wish a update with a happy ending

I know you have not updated in several years, but like others who have commented, I hope you someday do. Your writing is beautiful, poignant, and you've got the characters down so well. Thank you for sharing!

Nice how you filled in some background to flesh out Alice's character.

Thank you for giving us this absolutely beautiful scene of love between Alice and Uncas. Missing from the movie, this is a wonderful gift. I like your take on Alice here, that she is fully aware of what she is doing with Uncas and it's not out of shock or fear or the need for protection. While those are all legitimate reactions from Alice, it's great to have this one you have crafted. I hope you are still writing because you are a terrific writer! Thank you for sharing.

What an opening chapter! So well written. It has captured me!

I know it's been many a year since you last updated this story and you have probably forgotten all about it. However I must say that this story is really good and deserves to be completed. I hope you will consider finishing it and I would really like to see both of your alternate endings, particularly one in which Uncas and Alice live. Again, you are an incredible author and I hope you will please consider finishing this wonderful interpretation of LOTM. Thank you!

When you get around to writing the 2 different endings, I'm looking forward to the one where Alice and Uncas both live. I didn't like that part in the movie where they both died. Here's hoping you haven't abandoned this story.

Please update soon!

please save Uncas and Alice i dont want them to die

yes the movie does have a certain meaning and beautiful message but please dont end it the same way the movie does

please add and update and post the ending please save them and give them the ending they deserve

So, I just read this whole story, and it's amazing. I know you're probably not going to update again, but I love this. Best LOTM story I've ever read :)

I love what you're writing here! Please update soon, this is just so beautiful.

Aranel

Oh please update soon! This is such a well-written story and I so want to know what happens next!

Can't wait to see what you write next. However you write the ending I am sure it will be fantastic. Can't wait to see it! Update soon!

Wonderful chapter, your attention to detail is something I've noticed in your story. I like how you take your time. It doesn't seem like drawing it out because it's like you polish each chapter before submitting it and it's just a treat to read. I like it alot. (: I'll be interested to see how you end it lol. _ Great chapter.

OMG! U updated at last! ME WANT MORE SOON SOON SOON!

NO NO NO! Give the story a happy ending! Don't kill off poor Alice and Uncas!